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Split Lip

Jane tried to skip But she tripped -- Split! Her lip she bit

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 7/17/2019 7:21:00 PM
I sometimes bite my lip while just talking - and I second Kim's ouch!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2019 7:39:00 PM
Me, I just bite my tongue. LOL. :) gw
Date: 7/14/2019 1:51:00 PM
Ouch! I bet this happens more often than we think ;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/14/2019 2:25:00 PM
You are amazingly prescient, Kim, or perhaps a mind-reader. I actually had 'Ouch' in this little poem until the very final revision! :) gw

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