Split Derision

Does a little rebellion make one a hellion?

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/27/2019 1:51:00 PM

Well I guess this country was founded by hellions, then! :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/27/2019 2:20:00 PM

Perhaps exactly---the opposite! I.e., although the founders were rebellious, they were NOT hellions, but 'responsible revolutionaries,' so to speak. Thank you for the stimulating comment, Michelle. Best wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/25/2019 7:05:00 PM

I hope so. I am counting on it.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2019 8:23:00 PM

Oh, boy. I was counting on you to be counting on it. ~ The Count

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/25/2019 5:12:00 PM

Good heavens no! If it did, then my whole family would've been hellions. Cute piece; great question.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2019 8:22:00 PM

Ha, ha. My family would have been/ be hellions too.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/25/2019 9:40:00 AM

I guess that depends on what you are rebelling against!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2019 2:34:00 PM

Excellent point, ala 'Rebel with/without a Cause.' :) gw