Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Splendor of Spring

Ascending dawn scintillates in golden sunrise
Enriching ambience of grinning crimson skies
As gentle winds propagate splendorous themes
Of budding prairies, of avid burbling streams,
Of fragrant revelry swaying blossoming trees,
Luring nectar-dreams of waltzing, buzzing bees.

Birds merrily frolic~ hopping, trilling carefree,
Inspecting, admiring, a season donning glee,
Warbling mid-air, choreographing playful zeal 
Vying white blossoms of magnolia’s appeal,
Opulence of red tulips, distant lush foothills,
Gliding over exultantly dancing gold-daffodils.

Engrossed in resplendence, leisurely we stroll,
Embracing tender love smitten passions cajole,
Eying landscapes idyllic panoramic vistas scroll
From majestic mountain, vibrant grassy knoll~
Yearning earnestly euphonic ballad of spring
Reverberating melodies verses of hearts sing.

May 2, 2023
Poem of the day on May 4, 2023
Placed 1st: Up To 20 Lines Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Sotto Poet

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Robert Lindley August 30, 2023 at 11:38 AM My good friend, this is truly a masterpiece that captivates the reader! Such depths, imagery and purpose seals it to me as a new fav! God bless you for gifting us this fine poetry.

Sam Kauffman May 10, 2023 at 9:41 AM Vijay, this marvelous piece of wonderfully crafted lines must be read with careful attention to every well chosen word, every perfect image! What a joy to sink into its rich, poetic, beauty - like the joy of a spring morning! Double congratulations to you - POTD and a 1st place. Thank you for creating such a wonderful poem. Blessings to you!

Kim Rodrigues May 5, 2023 at 6:08 PM Congratulations on POTD! Vijay Pandit May 8, 2023 at 4:22 PM Many thanks, Kim--much appreciate.

Alexis Y. May 5, 2023 at 4:09 AM Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit May 8, 2023 at 4:22 PM Much appreciate your return visit, Alexis. Many thanks my friend.

Daisy Meadows May 4, 2023 at 10:11 PM Congratulations on your POTD. Well done. Vijay Pandit May 8, 2023 at 4:21 PM Thank you Jeanette--much appreciate.

Lin Lane May 4, 2023 at 9:48 PM I’m a titch late with my congratulations, Vijay, but they’re sincerely offered. Vijay Pandit May 8, 2023 at 4:21 PM Thank you Lin for visiting. Much appreciate.

Fin Chuuk May 4, 2023 at 6:05 PM Vijay, wow! Simply gorgeous. Congratulations on POTD! Vijay Pandit May 8, 2023 at 4:20 PM So vey kind of you Fin--much appreciate.

Brandy Nicole May 4, 2023 at 5:47 PM Your words welcome the beauty of Spring, along with everything- - magical. Congratulations Vijay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Vijay Pandit May 8, 2023 at 4:20 PM Many thanks for your return visit my friend. Much appreciate as always, Brandy.

Alkas Poetry May 4, 2023 at 5:12 PM Splinded DEAR POET, salute, alkas congrats Alkas Poetry May 4, 2023 at 5:22 PM i MEAN splendid DEAR... thanks... alkas Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 5:22 PM Thank you, Alkas, for visiting and commenting. Much appreciate your kind feedback.

Darlene De Beaulieu May 4, 2023 at 3:23 PM Hello Vijay, A beautiful poem of spring. Congrats on the POTD. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\x Darlene De Beaulieu May 5, 2023 at 3:56 PM Hello Vijay, I am happy to be here. Oh your welcome. Enjoy your weekend my friend. /Darlene\ Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 5:21 PM Glad to see you again, Darlene. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Constance La France May 4, 2023 at 2:52 PM Vijay, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor and on your win in the contest ! Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 5:20 PM Much appreciate, Constance. Many thanks for visiting and your kind remarks.

Regina Mcintosh May 4, 2023 at 12:57 PM Love it. Congrats on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 1:47 PM Glad you liked the poem, Gina. Many thanks. Blessings.

Warren Doll May 4, 2023 at 11:29 AM Vijay, so beautiful! Congratulations on POTD. It is well deserved.~ Warren. Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 1:46 PM Many thanks Warren--much appreciate.

Bill Baker May 4, 2023 at 9:01 AM Back to congratulate you on your POTD, Vijay. Enjoy your day in the spotlight. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 9:13 AM Thank you for your return visit, Bill. And thanks again for your FAVE. You are very kind, my friend.

Joanna Daniel May 4, 2023 at 8:59 AM Double congratulations on your win and POTD, Vijay, this is breathtakingly beautiful:) Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 9:12 AM Much appreciate your generous feedback, Jo. Many thanks.

Paulette Calasibetta May 4, 2023 at 8:32 AM Congratulations on your POTD! I particularly love your last stanza with the last line summing it all up to :Reverberating melodies verses of hearts sing" Paulette Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 9:11 AM Glad you stopped by with your kind feedback, Paulette. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Paula Goldsmith May 4, 2023 at 7:59 AM Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Splendor of Spring" is a lovely write. Have a great/blessed day.................. Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 8:17 AM Thank you your return visit, Paula. Much appreciate.

Malabika Ray Choudhury May 4, 2023 at 7:06 AM How beautiful are your images, Vijay, soothing, stunning, romantic! Congratulations on your great win - and honour of POTD. Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 8:17 AM So nice to hear that from you, Mala. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

Linda Alice Fowler May 4, 2023 at 5:57 AM Hello my friend Vijay. This lovely romantic pastoral walk is filled with your majestic imagery and passion for nature and love. A well-deserved POTD - congratulations! :) Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 8:16 AM Thank you friend for your visit and generous feedback. Much appreciate.

Mike Gentile May 4, 2023 at 4:17 AM Vijay, congratulations on your POTD honors for your seasonal delight of a poem! As always , your romantic imagery shines through! Enjoy your day! Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 8:15 AM Many thanks Mike. Always appreciate your kind feedback.

Tania Kitchin May 4, 2023 at 3:37 AM Vijay, a gorgeous Spring poem, congratulations on POTD! Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 8:15 AM So very kind of you Tania. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Jan Allison May 4, 2023 at 3:14 AM what amazing spring imagery, it truly is a beautiful time of year, many congrats on POTD Vijay:-) hugs jan xx Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 8:14 AM So nice to hear from you Jan. Glad to see you are back. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks. Many thanks.

Joseph May May 4, 2023 at 3:08 AM Beautiful imagery of Spring , Congrats on POTD Vijay Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 8:14 AM Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2023 at 2:46 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d, Vijay :) - hugs Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 8:13 AM Thank you for your return visit Anne-Lise. Much appreciate. Hugs to you.

Beryl Edmonds May 4, 2023 at 12:53 AM A magnificent poem on the Splendour of Spring Vijay elegantly portrayed. Congratulations on both your win in Sotto’s contest and for being awarded the honour of poem of the day… Belle Vijay Pandit May 4, 2023 at 8:12 AM So nice to hear that. Many thanks, Belle--much appreciate.

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