Splay

Wild and unkempt, the field croons to me,
a siren's call beseeching
to play tag with the wind,
sprinting across the uneven surface
and splay full-length, face-down
upon her mossy breast.

I gluttonously drink gulps of her scent,
fecund and rich and savory
enough to satisfy my appetite.
Then she whispers softly,
mere breath-brushes against my neck,
as the pull of an unheard heart-thump
draws me down
to nestle deeper in her caress.

The curly blades of grass trill arias
as they sing across my skin,
and tiny red ants
march to their drumbeat of life
in rank order rows tangent to my face,
while a solitary spider 
dangles from a single silken strand.
.
I lie hidden from the world
by my sentient shield
immersed in the rhythm
and innate magic of my overgrown meadow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mallett Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 6:45 PM
congratulations on being featured!
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January 9, 2009 at 12:56 PM
Wow, this is truly amazing! Congrads on being featured....:) Best wishes, Sara
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January 5, 2009 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations Jennifer on the featuring of "Splay." Vince
Brown Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 5:05 AM
Congratulations on being a finalist and having your poetry featured. Love Carol
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January 4, 2009 at 5:24 PM
Great job, Jennifer! Congratulations on making it to the final round! ~ Carrie
Jordan Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Jennifer - Seems to me like a double congratulations is in order – A Finalist and a featured poem – Great Job – God Bless, MJ
Winter Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations on being a featured finalist this week! Love, Shar
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December 4, 2008 at 7:43 AM
Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
Jordan Avatar
November 29, 2008 at 8:56 PM
Jennifer - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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November 19, 2008 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations on your entry advancing, Jennifer! This is a fantastic work of poetry! Warm regards, John.
Brown Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 4:33 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 7:47 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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October 26, 2008 at 7:24 PM
Jennifer - You're Poems' Imagery/Word selection/Syntax never swerve from their exactitude, continuing in an ever-poly- rhythmic "splay." This Piece, a certain exercise in the Poetics of Sound & Enjoyment! We're all holding the Vision for the WIN! H'H.
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