splash

the last raindrop sauntered into the pond ...late again

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/11/2024 11:42:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun "Splash" Monoku write. Few words with much said. Have a fun day writing away.................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/10/2024 8:39:00 PM

That last raindrop is a marked man. Sounds like the liquid version of 'The Ugly Duckling' to me. Maybe it'll turn into a beautiful ___________ (I dunno; you fill in the blank). Cheers, Gershon

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/5/2024 5:29:00 PM

enjoyed the clever Monoku. I especially liked you using the word 'saunter.' enjoy your evening, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/5/2024 2:59:00 PM

It was good to read about the last for a change. Firsts get too much attention. Short but catchy.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/5/2024 6:44:00 AM

Hello John, How cute and it made me chuckle a little this morning. - Blessings, Daniel