Spiritual Rings

I think of poetry
sometimes as sacred, 

at an altar

summoned by words
of God -- 

every expression a driven
reverberation,

myself a mere fork tuning
struck by hammers unfathomable

truth~ feeling more transcriber

such spiritual rings transcending Bard's --
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Love that last line. Transcendence of this life that dares to dream of Eden redeemed.
DiMino Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Kim; maybe if we dream it enough...to the point where Eden pops out of every vibration that is our being...maybe we will have Eden again. There are worse delusions. I choose this to be one of my many. Thank you, my friend. Blessings.
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