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Spirits Soar

Listening peacefully to Bach I soar, Above the clouds as a hawk I soar. Lying on forests mossy floor, Listening to natures talk I soar. Watching geese fly south, encore, Majestically beautiful flock I soar. Knowing life has so much in store, Answering its every knock I soar. At times life is like a lions roar, Standing as a solid rock I soar. I shall hear natures call, and open its door, Making sure that with every breath I soar. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans November 2012

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 2/8/2016 4:42:00 PM

Hi Brenda, your poem is beautiful, but I have to make a little comment. On the last line "every breath I soar" , should rhyme with "rock I soar... Knock I soar... Flock I soar ...) may be you can use ...............with watching the clock I soar. Thank you. You may email me and we can discuss further. Sincerely, Pashang

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/27/2014 11:35:00 AM

Soar, Brenda. This is a beautiful write. I like how everything in works as wind beneath your wings. :) Hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 9/16/2014 3:21:00 PM

I have never seen this form before Brenda and your write is soaring high:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/16/2014 3:30:00 PM

Thank you Jan.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2014 3:05:00 PM

oh, yes, the lovely ghazal. There are just so many cool poetry forms in this world. that was a great ending line for this form, brenda. I bet you have done more of this form since this one in 2012?

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/16/2014 3:29:00 PM

I actually have another one in here and a couple more in my computer. I was looking for different forms at that time and thought I had found a good variety in my collection, then I came here and found out I had only scratched the surface of poetry.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/16/2014 3:04:00 PM

melodious at the very least.. at most, a solid, lyrical piece, Brenda.. amazing.. huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/16/2014 3:25:00 PM

Thanks I'm glad you like it Nette

Sharon Gulley

Date: 9/16/2014 12:41:00 PM

Such a beautiful flowing write. I shall hear nature's call, and open it's door, making sure that with every breath I soar. Such a lovely piece....Sharon G.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/16/2014 12:46:00 PM

Thanks so much Sharon and thanks for visiting.