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Spirits of a Summer's Journey

Swinging, sideways in a striped hammock. Green, grand,leaves that gracefully grinned. Hearts, heavily-tanned hands holding our summer heaven. Wishing, wanting, to be...thirteen again. Graceful,gray gravel beneath our feet at eve. Mr.Moon's magical mystery, on your face, melodically sweet. Delicious, delightful, my dazzling summer night's treat! April 5, 2020 11:35pm PST

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/6/2020 7:54:00 PM

Oh, to be thirteen --- but not for long (for me). Would rather go back to 25 or so... Tra la! ~ Gershon

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/7/2020 10:33:00 AM

Whatever pleases you.... Thanks Gershon Panagiota Tues. 8:35am

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/6/2020 5:41:00 PM

Back to the past to relive out its sublime memories!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/6/2020 6:48:00 PM

Anyone can write about the past. I did it in a unique form that I rarely use. Thanks Panagiota

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/6/2020 1:50:00 PM

Panagiota, your poem takes me right into a summer night with graceful, dazzling, delightful, delicious alliteration delicate as moonlight! Enjoyed!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/7/2020 4:19:00 PM

Panagiota, thank you for your recognition of my efforts! I am honored! Sending blessings your way.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/6/2020 2:38:00 PM

Sam! You have the magical touch in how you commented. I truly appreciated this as opposed to two words. I will try and practice your artistry in my replies with you and others, With appreciation, Panagiota xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/6/2020 7:37:00 AM

In this meditative write there is such a pretty alliterative feel in so many of the lines my friend. Bravo!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/6/2020 1:11:00 PM

Oh, thank you, stalwart friend, Caren. It was a terribly fun write for me. Always, Panagiota