Spirited

As Santa was reading his list, he noticed the children he'd missed - he reached for a drink (it helps him to think), but sadly he always gets pissed... written 27th November for Tania's contest

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/23/2020 10:19:00 AM

Santa, I am sure will retire forever after a few years - children are beginning not o believe in him from a very young age and if they have older siblings even worse. You do so well with your Santa Limericks Jack, and I see you won, congratulations. Wishing you a Christmas full of happiness peace and love. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/20/2020 10:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,Jack , cute one. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus

Date: 12/20/2020 1:07:00 AM

Back with congratulations, Jack...and to wish you a Merry & Blessed Christmas. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2020 6:27:00 PM

I am wondering if pissed has also the slang meaning of "angry" that it has for Americans, which makes this a creative one for word play!! Congrats.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/19/2020 4:47:00 PM

omg this is so funny my friend, hope you and mum are well:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/19/2020 2:52:00 PM

Lol!Jack, This is hilarious! Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Merry Christmas a Happy New Year:-) Alexis

Joseph May

Date: 12/19/2020 6:50:00 AM

Lol, Congrats on your win

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/19/2020 6:46:00 AM

Truly funny, Jack! Congratulations!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/19/2020 3:42:00 AM

Jack, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative and fun limerick, love the title!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/29/2020 11:36:00 PM

After all that work and planning, I can understand how Santa felt, Jack! No doubt he was 'pissed' both ways:) Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2020 6:18:00 PM

hey a new poem and a cute one at that. Sorry I never answered at hotmail yet. My hotmail is being bizzarro today. I was not able to get some mail to go through. Hopefully later!!