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Spirit of a Champion

gaping mouth kiss to canvass
on my jugular death’s caress
my spirit’s quenched combust 
a champion in defeat’s bust

eyes swollen shut, “and he’s out!” 
down for the count on my gut
prey food to a superior predator
beneath the boot of my victor

ear compelled to my new level 
to the maniacal laughter of the devil
gasping bloodied snot for breath
choking on own uprooted teeth

flashing a mockery of embarrassment
cameras capture my lowest moment
in my fading hour...falling apart
in living colour...creating art

twelve rounds in life’s gruelling bout 
going toe to toe with an unfair lout
to be counted out of existence
I will accept with reluctance

“one, two,” referee takes a closer look
eight seconds to be written out of the history books 
“...three, four, five, six, seven...” don't hesitate
...and I’m up at the count of eight!

SPIRIT OF A CHAMPION

Thabang Jan Ngoma
22-07-2015

For Contest Name: Get Low
Sponsor: Casarah Nance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 24, 2015 at 3:25 PM
THABANG, Congrats in Casarah's getting low contest. Love **SKAT**
Ngoma Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 2:49 PM
Dankie baie Skatie...much love as always...Tbang
Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:33 AM
Well done, Thabang, a great take on the theme. Congrats, Viv
Ngoma Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 3:24 AM
Hi Viv...thank you so much and congrats on your awesome wining narrative. I loved the analogy used of the trains representing different adverseties in your life (:heers, Tbang
A. Sharma Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 12:56 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Thabang! Great work!
Ngoma Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 3:26 AM
Hi Dr. Upma...thank you very much - appreciated (:heers, Tbang
Y. Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 7:42 PM
Thabang, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
Ngoma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 8:27 PM
Hi Alexis...thank you so much. I love your work and I read your poem earlier...Touching, chilling and reassuring (:heers, Tbang
Nance Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 6:45 PM
I thought this was amazing, and if you followed the title of Get low, it would have been in the top ten, I had to show everyone what a good write this was though, thank you very much for entering!
Ngoma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 8:22 PM
Hi Casarah...appreciate you warranting the HM inspite of me failing to comply fully with the rules of the contest...the contest tested me and I can tell, from the other winners, that they had to dig deep as well...love your contests (:heers, Tbang
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 3:33 PM
A knockout of a write - congrats on your win Thabang:-) hugs Jan xx
Ngoma Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 4:21 PM
Hi Jan...thanks. How close have we all come to being written off...?I've read your winning write and its so poignant and compelling...(:heers, Tbang
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