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There's a plead need on the inside, settled into a biased way of thinking, Our view of event causation is linking, As a thick coat of ego veiled in wide. constant internal rumble or buzz, Fixed focus on a rising worry, Fresh joy beats sprang up in a hurry, To provide peace to the soul's fuzz. Consider that this is an assertion, The notes we're almost to convey, You assert that it was a successful display, With a holy and loving outlook version. In the cosmos, God's grace is plentiful, In the swirl of delight, we fulfill our love, God's task is completed when we move, The spirit may relax and become peaceful. Here, the focus is on paying attention, An emphasis on trivial things is unhealthy, could have a negative impact, stealthy, The purpose was to achieve this intention. Moving closer to the light of day, So much to intend almost and ponder, Plenty of room for failure yonder, One has not yet shown your care way. A spot where love whips as a heartbeat, fair and poised, respecting all people, If the heart nods in unison with the treacle, The wizard pursued to retain the heat. However, morality remains calm, A sign that follows a delusion, This could be an expert idea for exclusion, During the deep meditation, a psalm.
Written: November 14, 2022 Just before release Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 11/28/2022 2:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lasaad! Truly God's grace is plentiful in swirls of delight! What a beautiful image! So happy to see this poem of depth and thoughtful penning on the winners list. Congratulations on your win!! Blessings in the beauty of the Psalms to you.
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Date: 11/27/2022 11:20:00 PM
Congratulations Lasaad on your great win !
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Date: 11/27/2022 8:40:00 PM
A deep spiritual write, SP, distil each impulse in the elixirous mists of love divine. Warmest congratulations on your win
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Date: 11/16/2022 4:42:00 PM
Very deep and introspective, Lasaad. I'll have to think on this one and read it a few more times. Thanks for sharing your entry with us. Good luck my friend. Bill
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Date: 11/15/2022 7:49:00 AM
Lofty ideas in powerful diction ! Highly esoteric, as the subject demands ! Wish you the very best in the contest, dear Lasaad !
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Date: 11/15/2022 4:42:00 AM
Deep in introspection and meditation--seeking enlightenment.
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