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Spiral Explosions

SPIRAL EXPLOSIONS


Spirals
of  sweet explode
brushing  soft   against   curves
exquisitely mild  like   falling
teardrops.
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1:23 PM, June 06, 2015

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Sara Kendrick

June 15, 2015 at 3:19 PM

Very expressive work..Congrats on your win..I appreciate you entering..Sara

James Fraser

June 15, 2015 at 2:24 PM

Congratulations Olive on your deserved win with this little gem~hugs//James xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

October 26, 2015 at 4:10 AM

thanks much James. :D!

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 12, 2015 at 6:54 AM

- Congratulations on your win ! - I wish you a lovely weekend .... and I want to share my latest poem with you, dear Olive - Hope you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

October 26, 2015 at 4:10 AM

thanks much Anne Lise.. :D! hugs back!

Milton Robertson

June 12, 2015 at 6:53 AM

LOVELY...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 26, 2015 at 3:20 PM

Thank you.. =)

Andrea Dietrich

June 12, 2015 at 12:04 AM

congrats on the winner list, sweetie.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 26, 2015 at 3:19 PM

Tthank you Andie..=)

Eve Roper

June 11, 2015 at 4:42 PM

Congratulations on your win, Olive hugs dear friend Eve

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 26, 2015 at 3:18 PM

Hugs back too! Thank you.....

Skat A

June 11, 2015 at 3:56 PM

Olive, Congratulations........ SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 26, 2015 at 3:17 PM

Congratulations!!

Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2015 at 2:12 PM

Olive, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA"

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 25, 2015 at 4:10 PM

Thanks Linda. :)

Jan Allison

June 11, 2015 at 10:13 AM

this is so beautiful Olive congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 26, 2015 at 3:16 PM

Thank you Jan.. =)hugs back

Ravi Sathasivam

June 11, 2015 at 2:08 AM

Excellent imagery. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 17, 2015 at 6:02 AM

thank you Ravi.. =)

Connie Marcum Wong

June 11, 2015 at 1:28 AM

Oh, this is beautiful Olive. A favorite entry of mine. I am so happy I got to read this one. Congratulations on your HM.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 14, 2015 at 9:11 AM

thank you so much Connie... =) God bless.. :)!

Matthew Anish

June 10, 2015 at 11:21 PM

Sweet, sensuous verse here. You did justice to this form! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 14, 2015 at 8:30 AM

Thank you so much Matthew.. =)

Kim Merryman

June 10, 2015 at 10:21 PM

A lovely cinquain, Olive! Congrats on your Honorable Mention! Love, Kim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 14, 2015 at 12:31 AM

thanks much Kim.. :)!

James Fraser

June 10, 2015 at 3:08 PM

Sultry inventions of thought, I'm bought, soon taught. Spiral explosions abound within sound of their surround, found like falling tears that turn into hearts that now rebound / xx / hugs~~Dino James xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 14, 2015 at 1:11 AM

James, huge one, weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I know what you are saying.... winnks and hugs!!!!!~Olive Eloisa

Afolabi Muideen

June 9, 2015 at 11:10 PM

What a fabulous write, so interesting and enjoyable........excellent write Olive........A.M.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 14, 2015 at 1:06 AM

Thank you so much!.. :) glad you like it.. :D!

M. L. Kiser

June 9, 2015 at 2:41 PM

How beautiful...excellent imagery.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 14, 2015 at 1:02 AM

thanks much M.L~Olive ELoisa

Paul Callus

June 9, 2015 at 12:18 PM

This is beautiful Olive_eloi! Lovely with soft brushes of tempting imagery. Hope to write one for this contest, but am very busy. Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 14, 2015 at 12:30 AM

Dear Paul, I actually made three for this contest but then I chose this for a change of my usual serious tones of entering a contest.. using imagination and again thinking out of the box.. :D! thanks!

Bl Devnath

June 9, 2015 at 11:59 AM

Very nice poem written from acute observation. Soft teardrops drifting against curves. Well done. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 10, 2015 at 11:51 AM

thank you so much BL... :) I appreciate you dropping by.. :D!

Nette Onclaud

June 9, 2015 at 9:56 AM

enticing kind of fragrance, eloi... very creative, ' like falling teardrops"... hey, wassup?.. keep in touch.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 10, 2015 at 10:19 AM

Thanks much Nette a pleasure to read as always your comment.. :)! huggs tooo!!!!

Eve Roper

June 8, 2015 at 9:51 PM

Good pen, Olive, a 7, and thank you for your wonderful compliment on my Footle hugs eve

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 9, 2015 at 4:10 PM

Hi Eve, you are welcome.. thank you for coming by and dropping by . =')

Andrea Dietrich

June 8, 2015 at 3:33 PM

Great imagery, Olive. You are so good at thinking outside the box! and thanks for the fave.Glad you enjoyed my humor.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 9, 2015 at 4:09 PM

Thank you so much Andie.. =') Yes this not the first time I read a humor poem from you Andie.. =')

Constance La France

June 8, 2015 at 10:15 AM

Olive beautifully penned poem a 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, apply within

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 9, 2015 at 5:38 AM

Thank you Broken Wings.. =') it is how you write your verses that draws me back to read more.. =') thank you much..

Gary Bateman

June 8, 2015 at 10:15 AM

Hello Olive!! Your Cinquain poem here is really nice. Great use of the your words and imagery. Reading your poem here has convinced me to try my hand writing a couple of these very soon. I try to experiment from time to time with other forms. Very Well-Done Olive!! And a "7" for sure!! Best Always, Gary

Gary Bateman

June 9, 2015 at 6:42 AM

Hello Olive . . . I will try this form out soon. I plan to some Cinquains and Clerihews in the very near future. You'll need to let me know you impressions of them too. Please check out my PoetrySoup Blog concerning my new book and let me know what you think of it!! Hasta La Vista!! Gary

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 9, 2015 at 5:36 AM

Gary, this my first try on Cinquains.. <=')! I made three but among the three thks my fave.. :D thank you so much.. I think you will like this form.. =')