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Spiral Explosions

SPIRAL EXPLOSIONS


Spirals
of  sweet explode
brushing  soft   against   curves
exquisitely mild  like   falling
teardrops.
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1:23 PM, June 06, 2015

Copyright © Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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Sara Kendrick Date: 6/15/2015 3:19:00 PM Very expressive work..Congrats on your win..I appreciate you entering..Sara Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 6/15/2015 2:24:00 PM Congratulations Olive on your deserved win with this little gem~hugs//James xxx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/26/2015 4:10:00 AM thanks much James. :D!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/12/2015 6:54:00 AM - Congratulations on your win ! - I wish you a lovely weekend .... and I want to share my latest poem with you, dear Olive - Hope you enjoy it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 10/26/2015 4:10:00 AM thanks much Anne Lise.. :D! hugs back!

Milton Robertson Date: 6/12/2015 6:53:00 AM LOVELY... Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/26/2015 3:20:00 PM Thank you.. =)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/12/2015 12:04:00 AM congrats on the winner list, sweetie. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/26/2015 3:19:00 PM Tthank you Andie..=)

Eve Roper Date: 6/11/2015 4:42:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Olive hugs dear friend Eve Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/26/2015 3:18:00 PM Hugs back too! Thank you.....

Skat A Date: 6/11/2015 3:56:00 PM Olive, Congratulations........ SKAT Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/26/2015 3:17:00 PM Congratulations!!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/11/2015 2:12:00 PM Olive, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA" Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/25/2015 4:10:00 PM Thanks Linda. :)

Jan Allison Date: 6/11/2015 10:13:00 AM this is so beautiful Olive congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/26/2015 3:16:00 PM Thank you Jan.. =)hugs back

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 6/11/2015 2:08:00 AM Excellent imagery. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/17/2015 6:02:00 AM thank you Ravi.. =)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/11/2015 1:28:00 AM Oh, this is beautiful Olive. A favorite entry of mine. I am so happy I got to read this one. Congratulations on your HM. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2015 9:11:00 AM thank you so much Connie... =) God bless.. :)!

Matthew Anish Date: 6/10/2015 11:21:00 PM Sweet, sensuous verse here. You did justice to this form! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2015 8:30:00 AM Thank you so much Matthew.. =)

Kim Merryman Date: 6/10/2015 10:21:00 PM A lovely cinquain, Olive! Congrats on your Honorable Mention! Love, Kim Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2015 12:31:00 AM thanks much Kim.. :)!

James Fraser Date: 6/10/2015 3:08:00 PM Sultry inventions of thought, I'm bought, soon taught. Spiral explosions abound within sound of their surround, found like falling tears that turn into hearts that now rebound / xx / hugs~~Dino James xx Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2015 1:11:00 AM James, huge one, weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I know what you are saying.... winnks and hugs!!!!!~Olive Eloisa

Afolabi Muideen Date: 6/9/2015 11:10:00 PM What a fabulous write, so interesting and enjoyable........excellent write Olive........A.M. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2015 1:06:00 AM Thank you so much!.. :) glad you like it.. :D!

M. L. Kiser Date: 6/9/2015 2:41:00 PM How beautiful...excellent imagery. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2015 1:02:00 AM thanks much M.L~Olive ELoisa

Paul Callus Date: 6/9/2015 12:18:00 PM This is beautiful Olive_eloi! Lovely with soft brushes of tempting imagery. Hope to write one for this contest, but am very busy. Hugs // paul Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/14/2015 12:30:00 AM Dear Paul, I actually made three for this contest but then I chose this for a change of my usual serious tones of entering a contest.. using imagination and again thinking out of the box.. :D! thanks!

Bl Devnath Date: 6/9/2015 11:59:00 AM Very nice poem written from acute observation. Soft teardrops drifting against curves. Well done. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2015 11:51:00 AM thank you so much BL... :) I appreciate you dropping by.. :D!

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/9/2015 9:56:00 AM enticing kind of fragrance, eloi... very creative, ' like falling teardrops"... hey, wassup?.. keep in touch.. huggs Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/10/2015 10:19:00 AM Thanks much Nette a pleasure to read as always your comment.. :)! huggs tooo!!!!

Eve Roper Date: 6/8/2015 9:51:00 PM Good pen, Olive, a 7, and thank you for your wonderful compliment on my Footle hugs eve Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/9/2015 4:10:00 PM Hi Eve, you are welcome.. thank you for coming by and dropping by . =')

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/8/2015 3:33:00 PM Great imagery, Olive. You are so good at thinking outside the box! and thanks for the fave.Glad you enjoyed my humor. Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/9/2015 4:09:00 PM Thank you so much Andie.. =') Yes this not the first time I read a humor poem from you Andie.. =')

Constance La France Date: 6/8/2015 10:15:00 AM Olive beautifully penned poem a 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, apply within Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/9/2015 5:38:00 AM Thank you Broken Wings.. =') it is how you write your verses that draws me back to read more.. =') thank you much..

Gary Bateman Date: 6/8/2015 10:15:00 AM Hello Olive!! Your Cinquain poem here is really nice. Great use of the your words and imagery. Reading your poem here has convinced me to try my hand writing a couple of these very soon. I try to experiment from time to time with other forms. Very Well-Done Olive!! And a "7" for sure!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Gary Bateman Date: 6/9/2015 6:42:00 AM Hello Olive . . . I will try this form out soon. I plan to some Cinquains and Clerihews in the very near future. You'll need to let me know you impressions of them too. Please check out my PoetrySoup Blog concerning my new book and let me know what you think of it!! Hasta La Vista!! Gary Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/9/2015 5:36:00 AM Gary, this my first try on Cinquains.. <=')! I made three but among the three thks my fave.. :D thank you so much.. I think you will like this form.. =')

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2015 6:04:00 AM - A Beauty, dear Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 6/8/2015 11:02:00 AM thank you so much Anne Lise.. =') hugs!