Spinning

Spinning Spinning Earth moves Life rushes around Gravity denies my soul’s Flight

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2010 8:11:00 AM

Very timely write, Jimbo! The recent rash of earthquakes and tsunamis has made me feel the earth is rebelling against man's ignorance and greed. We are "Spinning" out of control. Soup mail returned. Much love always, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/1/2010 6:16:00 AM

gravity is a love/hate.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/1/2010 4:33:00 AM

it's ok Stephanie, I know you must be hurting, to lash out at me like this....I forgive you....Peace and Joy this Easter Weekend I wish for you and your loved ones, much love, James Marshall Goff

Brian Strand

Date: 3/31/2010 11:33:00 PM

Easter greetings Jim thank you your your welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 3/31/2010 11:06:00 PM

sometimes I like to spin in my head, the feeling winded fingers twirling in thread. Thread of my hair, gliding so soft, want to peel out, but stuck in my thoughts. We could all fly, we just keep dreaming, but if we stop giving, it will have no meaning. But I'll keep soaring in my mind, cause when I go in there...I always have a good time. nice poem Goff (:

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/31/2010 8:47:00 PM

It's is fine write. I enjoyed it. I could catch the speed

James Peranteau

Date: 3/31/2010 8:08:00 PM

I'm dizzy now ! Great write Sir ! Centrifugal force, 1038mph at the equator...just enough to keep our feet on the earth ! Awesome poem Mr. Goff ! james