Spilled Milk

I said, “You’re the cream of the crop!”
You called me your buttercup.
Emotions churned.
I milked the situation for all its worth,
As my dreams sat splendid before me.
Then, your life spilled out into the world,
And I became unwanted;
A container of spoiled passion
And curdled desires.
You dashed my hopes,
Leaving behind, 
The tracks of you,
and Bessie.
That old cow!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 4:14 PM
Sounds like a rancid cheeseball would dare hurt you! Witty poem though.
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 9:40 PM
YOu sure got those expressions mixed really well into this one. I really liked it. LUv, Andrea
Whitehead Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 4:58 AM
very good piece of writing, throughly enjoyed it. Loved the line "Emotions churned" and "curdled desires". very funny last line a real winner! regards carolann
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July 28, 2010 at 7:40 AM
LiFE TRuE FoRM ENJOYED YoUR PoEM, VIRGINIA.-SKAT
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