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Web caught in my head— The tunnel vision clears, as A poem slips out.

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Date: 9/29/2023 10:42:00 AM
Excellent!
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Date: 9/9/2023 4:56:00 AM
“A poem slips out” ah love this haiku so creatively written. Very unique, as poems slip out so much in our mind feels lighter
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Date: 9/8/2023 7:23:00 PM
A wonderful Haiku Paige. So clever with your choice of words. Great imagery. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
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Date: 9/8/2023 7:17:00 PM
I like the imagery, poems can be slippery things sometimes~
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Date: 9/8/2023 5:51:00 PM
Very original haiku-Lovely.
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Date: 9/8/2023 3:59:00 PM
Wow, Paige, In just a few words you conveyed such a great view between the visible and invisible, and it's a newborn marvel.
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