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Spider.

spider waiting hard cobweb under white cherry humble-bee brakes it throuh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/28/2010 12:31:00 AM
the patience of a spider is something, but when they finally do see a chance they make no mistake, imagine as a meal depending on others to slip, thats something huh? enjoy your day.:)
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Date: 4/27/2010 6:12:00 AM
A nice senryu with apt images
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:16:00 AM
well done nice read,..p.d.
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:06:00 AM
Great nature write...The bee was lucky though...Mostly they get trapped and don't break through...Sara
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