Spider.

spider waiting hard
cobweb under 
white cherry
humble-bee brakes 
it throuh.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Burton Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 12:31 AM
the patience of a spider is something, but when they finally do see a chance they make no mistake, imagine as a meal depending on others to slip, thats something huh? enjoy your day.:)
Mehta Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 6:12 AM
A nice senryu with apt images
A   Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 3:16 AM
well done nice read,..p.d.
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 3:06 AM
Great nature write...The bee was lucky though...Mostly they get trapped and don't break through...Sara
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