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Spewing Fire

It awakens by blowing its top Spewing a fiery mix, Volcanic ash rising higher and higher and will cover the land when it falls People flee from its wrath As the lava flows to sea; If they awaken the volcano within Will you erupt violently too 3-3-2024

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/4/2024 7:05:00 AM

What a powerful write this is dear joseph, i love the flow of this and your word choices here really goes with the concept of the poem. Brilliant. And anger and rage, youve described very well, should definitely flee from such wrath. Pleasure reading this

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/3/2024 6:11:00 PM

A good poem about nature's violence. It is exciting reading.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/3/2024 1:34:00 PM

That's not a safe place to be, in the presence of someone who's angry. It's best to flee so they can cool off. My best to you, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/3/2024 1:14:00 PM

This is an exquisite and uplifting piece of literature, much akin to the atmosphere of a beautiful spring day Joseph. The analogy you have drawn between the emotions conveyed and the experience of rage is truly commendable.

Silent One

Date: 3/3/2024 8:25:00 AM

Great analogy, many are like this with their rage.. Nicely done Joseph..

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/3/2024 7:59:00 AM

Well done Joseph. Descriptive and thought provoking. Good comparison . ..Questioning whether someone will erupt from within. Hopefully not. Powerful :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/3/2024 6:30:00 AM

A disaster is no place to be. Powerful ending lines speak to a disaster within.