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I find myself in a dark barren place where sweaty palms now attest to my fear. And with every beat, my heart starts to race for I can’t see how to get out of here. Seeking out artifacts from ancient graves I sift myth from saga, as I explore. And I’ve a proclivity for dank caves where my temerity’s trapped me before. A subtle nuance splits hero from fool and that fact seeps into my bone marrow. For there’s an aperture where the air’s cool but I can’t move, the space is too narrow. Spelunking should never be done alone lucky for me there's bars on my cell phone. (Sonnet) Nov. 7, 2018 Eight word challenge-9 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 12/2/2018 9:25:00 AM
Claustrophobia is one of my problems so I leave doors open, Emile, I enjoyed reading and great way of the use of the 8 words .. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/2/2018 11:04:00 AM
Thanks so much Eve, I appreciate your continued support my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/28/2018 7:34:00 AM
Lol! Love how you finished that ;D curiosity didn't kill that cat. Congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 11/28/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/27/2018 9:44:00 PM
Congrats Emile on another excellent write ...and win!
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Date: 11/28/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thanks John, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/27/2018 9:43:00 PM
Funny! Congrats, Emile! LyLy xoxo
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Date: 11/28/2018 7:49:00 AM
Thanks Lycia, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/27/2018 8:12:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Emile - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season - wonderful write on the joys of caves, (something I love)! :-)
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Date: 11/28/2018 7:49:00 AM
Thanks so much Gregory, your comments are most welcome my friend, may you and yours enjoy the holidays, Emile
Date: 11/7/2018 2:48:00 PM
Well done, Emile. Tough challenge but you aced it.
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Date: 11/7/2018 3:11:00 PM
Thanks Line, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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