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Spells Spun From a Drunk Pen

The dark witch laughed as she held a drunk pen Which she used to write spells without pity Spells that are out of whack in the open She can’t align her papers perfectly Her powers are evil and shown darkly But the fun the pen sure had shows this day The spells falter and fail, dissolve away The sputter of a wand after the spell Messes up and coughs up evil today She sure finds herself in a lot of hell Russell Sivey Was an entry into Joann Grisetti's Drunk Pen contest But found out it had to be Free Verse, Narrative, or Prose

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/1/2012 7:42:00 PM

Russel, I like the form in your poem. Free-verse or not,,, your poem speaks very drunken,,, enjoyed :-) always *sweet PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2012 4:34:00 PM

oh oh, you did it in form. Well, just do it again, russell . YOU Can DO IT.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2012 7:51:00 AM

That witch was in trully unpredictable situation..Great work that stands alone..I hope that witch is not out looking for people on which to write a spell..Thanks for stopping by..It would have been a winner..Maybe you could rewrite with just a few changes and you'll have a winner..Sara