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Spellbound

Ancient moon gets caught, Clings and hovers on the brink Of a spellbound tide Inspired by Raul's contest "Reflections"

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Michael Jordan

Date: 12/23/2009 7:01:00 PM

Carrie this is excellent - congrats on placing in Raul's contest - NORCAL - is in the house - that's right neighbor - God Bless, YF4L, MJ

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/19/2009 2:35:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie, on your success in Raul’s Reflections contest with this heartfelt poem. It has me spellbound. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/7/2009 5:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Reflections" Contest! Great imagery! Peace and love, Audrey

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/3/2009 3:46:00 PM

I really like this one! Carrie! congrats! jimbo

Elaine George

Date: 12/3/2009 8:52:00 AM

Wow! Love this one Carrie. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/2/2009 7:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this magical haiku, Carrie :) such wonderful imagery! enjoy your day!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/2/2009 4:11:00 PM

Very reflective Haiku Carrie. Congrats on your win! -Robert

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/2/2009 1:46:00 PM

Congratulations on winning in Raul's contest with this wonderful haiku. I love the image of the moon getting "caught" by the tide. ~Juliane

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/2/2009 1:43:00 PM

Carrie, Congratulations on your win in Raul's "Reflections" Contest! Peace and love, Audrey

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/2/2009 8:55:00 AM

Congrats Carrie on this lovely piece..Ancient moon gets caught...wonderful Love, BG

Brian Strand

Date: 12/2/2009 7:47:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2009 5:14:00 AM

Congrats, Carrie, on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved win.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2009 3:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carrie. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/2/2009 2:39:00 AM

Carrie, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/30/2009 9:42:00 PM

Thanks for supporting my contest...Raul

Donna Golden

Date: 11/29/2009 1:06:00 PM

Absolutely gorgeous haiku, Carrie! Best of luck in the contest with this winning write! Hugs, Donna

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/29/2009 10:26:00 AM

AWESOME HAIKU INDEED..ORIGINAL--Charma

Daniel Corcoran

Date: 11/29/2009 9:17:00 AM

very good haiku. good luck in the contest.