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Speed of Light

I will hold you and you will know Just how much I love you As our hearts grow brighter With every shooting star, We are making wishes come true Winking in the skies of midnight blue In our own galaxy, love moves instantly At the speed of light because, We know this was meant to be right Heidi Sands 11/27/18

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Date: 12/10/2018 7:27:00 PM
"In our own galaxy" - you have described love PERFECTLY in these 4 little words. I may have to borrow them for my own poem with your permission.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2018 7:29:00 PM
Thank you Caren. Ok :)
Date: 12/1/2018 8:17:00 PM
Sigh! At the speed of light! Now, here's to it last as long as the universe does... :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/2/2018 7:42:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and comment GW :)
Date: 11/29/2018 5:02:00 PM
Hello Dear Heidi, I really like your new free verse write here!! Quite romantic!!The theme notion of anything dealing with the speed of light usually is laden with scientific stuff and jargon. But the symbolism you've employed in your metaphoric references to "hearts growing brighter" and "every shooting star,"etc -- is marvelously done!! Great imagery too and a true treat to read, as always!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/1/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Gary. I appreciate your kind feedback on this one and I am happy to hear you like it :) Cheers!
Date: 11/28/2018 6:45:00 PM
Lovely romantic write Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2018 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Joseph I am happy to hear that :)
Date: 11/27/2018 7:18:00 PM
Another well done poem; great imagery in a beautiful word painting.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you M.L. :)
Date: 11/27/2018 7:06:00 PM
A beautiful, loving poem, Heidi. And in poem book, any poem w/speed of light in it is a winner. A dreamy poem for sure. Love and smiles always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/28/2018 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Freddie. Love and smiles :)
Date: 11/27/2018 6:56:00 PM
Godspeed my lovely friend...thru infinite light...great write Heidi...love & eternal light, for you...^WW^
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2018 6:59:00 PM
Thank you so much WW. :) Love & Light
Date: 11/27/2018 3:00:00 PM
This is so very romantic Heidi especially for romantic dreamers like me!! Beautiful xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2018 3:02:00 PM
Thank you Mike. I am happy you like it :)
Date: 11/27/2018 1:01:00 PM
A charming poem of sweet love..just right..at the speed of light. Well written, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2018 1:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay :)
Date: 11/27/2018 1:00:00 PM
A celestial love story - enthralling!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Michelle! :)
Date: 11/27/2018 11:30:00 AM
Tenderly romantic dearest, Heidi! You have painted the universe with the color of love!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2018 12:48:00 PM
Thank you so much Demetrios :)
Date: 11/27/2018 11:20:00 AM
Beautiful Heidi, love looks good on you. : )
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/27/2018 12:47:00 PM
Thank you very much Chris :)

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