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Speed of Light

I will hold you and you will know
Just how much I love you
As our hearts grow brighter
With every shooting star,
We are making wishes come true
Winking in the skies of midnight blue
In our own galaxy, love moves instantly
At the speed of light because,
We know this was meant to be right

Heidi Sands

11/27/18

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 12/10/2018 7:27:00 PM "In our own galaxy" - you have described love PERFECTLY in these 4 little words. I may have to borrow them for my own poem with your permission. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 12/10/2018 7:29:00 PM Thank you Caren. Ok :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/1/2018 8:17:00 PM Sigh! At the speed of light! Now, here's to it last as long as the universe does... :) gw Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 12/2/2018 7:42:00 AM Thank you for your visit and comment GW :)

Gary Bateman Date: 11/29/2018 5:02:00 PM Hello Dear Heidi, I really like your new free verse write here!! Quite romantic!!The theme notion of anything dealing with the speed of light usually is laden with scientific stuff and jargon. But the symbolism you've employed in your metaphoric references to "hearts growing brighter" and "every shooting star,"etc -- is marvelously done!! Great imagery too and a true treat to read, as always!! Cheers and Best, Gary Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 12/1/2018 7:40:00 AM Thank you so much Gary. I appreciate your kind feedback on this one and I am happy to hear you like it :) Cheers!

Joseph May Date: 11/28/2018 6:45:00 PM Lovely romantic write Heidi.. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/28/2018 7:15:00 PM Thank you Joseph I am happy to hear that :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 11/27/2018 7:18:00 PM Another well done poem; great imagery in a beautiful word painting. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/28/2018 7:04:00 AM Thank you M.L. :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 11/27/2018 7:06:00 PM A beautiful, loving poem, Heidi. And in poem book, any poem w/speed of light in it is a winner. A dreamy poem for sure. Love and smiles always. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/28/2018 7:03:00 AM Thank you Freddie. Love and smiles :)

Winged Warrior Date: 11/27/2018 6:56:00 PM Godspeed my lovely friend...thru infinite light...great write Heidi...love & eternal light, for you...^WW^ Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/27/2018 6:59:00 PM Thank you so much WW. :) Love & Light

Mike Gentile Date: 11/27/2018 3:00:00 PM This is so very romantic Heidi especially for romantic dreamers like me!! Beautiful xxoo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/27/2018 3:02:00 PM Thank you Mike. I am happy you like it :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/27/2018 1:01:00 PM A charming poem of sweet love..just right..at the speed of light. Well written, Heidi. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/27/2018 1:42:00 PM Thank you so much Vijay :)

Michelle Faulkner Date: 11/27/2018 1:00:00 PM A celestial love story - enthralling! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/27/2018 1:41:00 PM Thank you Michelle! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/27/2018 11:30:00 AM Tenderly romantic dearest, Heidi! You have painted the universe with the color of love! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/27/2018 12:48:00 PM Thank you so much Demetrios :)

Chris Green Date: 11/27/2018 11:20:00 AM Beautiful Heidi, love looks good on you. : ) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 11/27/2018 12:47:00 PM Thank you very much Chris :)