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Speed - Journal Xii

SPEED – JOURNAL XII It’s hard to keep up The world is changing so fast On the news, fast talkers We ancients need motorized walkers What once was considered speed reading has, apparently, become the norm Eyes travel slowly over familiar phrases These trigger memories, disturb concentration Lines disappear prematurely Fiction-wise, there are, for us experienced sages, no new plots Even the variations are multi=traveled All interest fades in a fetid pool of boredom Film producers are wise to the over-taxed plot And try to stimulate public interest with fast- moving, noisy, violence Which manages to lack any sort of sensible organization No, all is chaos, at least to us old timer’s tastes In these last few I shall try to harvest those few inner moments Which stir a sort of over all activity This I call faking-oneself-out

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/6/2014 7:11:00 PM
Daver, as I read this I feel the world is digressing and you are the one accelerating even though the speed of the world seems to advance with its chaos and lost emotion! What a wonderful write as you fillet your real heart for the audience. I really enjoyed this one! Glad to be back and reading again!
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Date: 7/31/2014 10:56:00 PM
I hope you can harvest a lot of these inner moments, Daver. I find myself somewhere in the middle of the old and the new generations. A lover of the modern movies but a hater of modern technology that isolates people in little bubbles just doing text messages all day long. It's a very strange new world. I have a love hate relationship with it!
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Date: 7/31/2014 10:54:00 PM
Daver, that Alvin was not normal. All we did was make out and I could tell that he felt guilty about it. That's what too much religion does to some people!!! Anyway, he was a very good boy! now I will read your poem.
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