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- breath blushes blue between us ... you ask the question THAT question so, you're requesting rationality, lucidity when you stand before me dressed in pure starlight ONLY starlight, with moon drops in your eyes splashing your coy smile like rare south sea pearls damp from our cool evening swim, you shiver dancing drops of dazzling diamond dew shimmer like dermal constellations turning your sublime surfaces into an ocean of sprites - haute couture by the Cosmos precious few and precious, times like these when those definitions of love made in youth - those confusing impulses of the emotional and physical swirl and spin and wrap me like fleece passion, desire, beauty … and love spun together like soft cotton candy - sweet and sticky and warm on the lips melting together with THAT question, THAT concern but what IS true? what defines "reality"? what will last beyond this intense need to have you to know you, taste you, every tender centimeter every curvaceous, sublime, secret spot? you stand there, perfectly imperfect, pert and saucy form covered in tiny bumps of enticing invitation your body’s braille, pleading steam rising into the cool evening air like a sigh from your skin waiting for my answer - my affirmation but I am mute ... entranced ... numb … - I will let my body … speak. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Splash" Poetry Contest, Kai Michael Neumann, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 4th Place ~ in the "2019 Poetry Marathon Mile 24" Poetry Contest, Mark Toney, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Screwed XVIII" Poetry Contest, Rob Carmack, Judge & Sponsor. (No cliche's via PS Cliche Finder). ~ 10th Place ~ in the "Best Free Verse In April - Not For A Contest" Poetry Contest, Laura Loo, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 6/8/2020 8:28:00 AM
This is such a sublime, soothing write from you and it leads to vivid imaginations painted in my mind. Creative, deep and mystic. Congratulations on your well-deserved win Greg :) Glad I got to read it.
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Date: 3/16/2019 11:53:00 AM
Greg, this is such a beautiful, sensual poem with such sublime romantic imagery wrapped in your supporting curvacious formatted form. Outstanding...leaves me speechless...and breathless! Congratulation on another fine win in the Marathon Mile contest! Sandra <3 ;)
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Date: 3/16/2019 11:31:00 AM
Greg, congratulations on your well deserved win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/15/2019 10:54:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Greg! WHEW! Janice
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Date: 3/15/2019 9:47:00 PM
Greg, another sublime entry from you! Love the way you formatted it too. Congratulations on your win on Mile 24 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest. Only 3 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/15/2019 10:14:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much, Mark, I am truly honored, and humbled to be among these other superb writes, each one worthy of a list-topping placement ... I can imagine how difficult it is to place this work, as they are the best of such amazing poets! I'm so pleased you liked this one, as it is special to me. Many thanks and blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 5/11/2018 7:45:00 PM
yum. Obviously too many amazing poems get entered. Love the concept of this contest.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/16/2018 9:35:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Virginia - it's a pretty cool concept, I agree! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 5/11/2018 5:09:00 AM
I remember this one :) Congratulations Greg! Mo hugs x ~<3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/16/2018 9:35:00 PM
Thank you sweetly, Sweet Mo - much appreciated! :-) <3
Date: 5/10/2018 10:23:00 PM
Back with more deserved congrats, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/16/2018 9:34:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Line! :-) <3
Date: 5/10/2018 9:08:00 PM
Indeed Greg, our feet on the ground but every passion on forever. Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/16/2018 9:31:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Rob, I am humbled and honored by my placement, and so pleased to be on a list with such wonderful poets! Blessings! :-)
Date: 4/29/2018 10:41:00 PM
Wow! Very sensual and romantic, Greg, congratulations on your placement. Hugs Eve
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/30/2018 6:16:00 AM
That's very sweet and kind of you, Eve - thank you so much! :-) <3
Date: 4/29/2018 4:45:00 AM
The placement of this write has left me speechless. I honestly don't know why you bother to enter contests, Greg. I've read several others that placed above you and see typos and wrong tense used. Your talent is not overlooked...it's feared.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/30/2018 7:13:00 AM
No, you really don't have to respect decisions made when they're not based on talent, but as long as you keep entering certain contests you'll get what they give...and you know exactly what I mean. If you want to remove this comment, do so.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/30/2018 6:15:00 AM
This is so very kind of you, Lin ... I always get such heartfelt and straight-forward comments from you, and I appreciate them more than you know. I felt this was one of my best, but people like what they like, and I have to respect their decisions. There are so many wonderful writers here, and so much competition! Blessings, My Dear Friend! :-) <3
Date: 4/28/2018 3:25:00 PM
Big sigh... beyond sensual... an erotic glimpse into a memory for some, a dream for others. Congratulations on your win. Your talent is never ending and I do enjoy.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/28/2018 8:01:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Susan, I so appreciate the kind words ... I barely made the list, but better than NOT, obviously. Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 4/28/2018 1:59:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/28/2018 8:00:00 PM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 4/28/2018 12:56:00 PM
very sensual and romantic. I absolutely love it! I am never surprised to see you on the winners list, you have such a gift in your wonderful pen dear man...thank you and congratulations on your placement. ;)-luloo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/28/2018 7:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura Loo - so greatly appreciated.
Date: 4/17/2018 1:39:00 PM
No words needed when passion is ablaze...Great write Greg
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:37:00 AM
You are so right, Joseph - the language of the heart ... and we ALL speak it! Many thanks, my friend! :-)
Date: 4/16/2018 11:25:00 AM
Dermal constellations... spoonful of swoon! I say no more <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/18/2018 1:36:00 AM
Very kind of you, Mo - thanks so much! :-) <3
Date: 4/15/2018 9:22:00 PM
So sizzling, Gregory R. This is the ultimate in body-mind-soul tension. Super-sensual, yet simultaneously cooly cosmic. What a write. A tip of the hat (and the whole head!) to you, Poet. ~gw
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/15/2018 10:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Buddy - appreciate the kindness as always! :-)
Date: 4/15/2018 9:19:00 PM
Very romantic, Gregory. Charming and lovely. A winner.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/15/2018 10:20:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line - blessings! :-)
Date: 4/15/2018 8:39:00 PM
Ooh lala! Lovely and sensuous write! So many wonderful images!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/15/2018 10:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim - I'm glad you liked it! :-) <3

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