Speech Bubbles

Icy palm shelters a fevered mouth. I still know what you're thinking. Speech needn't become tangible for your words to cut and bruise. What you ache to say blankets, lingers atmospherically between us. Long gone are days of battling space, requiring time, not colloquy. What's the use of using words if they only cut and bruise. A simple glance, curl of lip a siren, screeching through the silence. Say nothing, if you can't speak nice. Converse with me in bubbles to ignore as I please, I never learnt to read.
11 Sept 2011
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Ramage Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 7:33 AM
Nice poem, congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee
Bagnall Avatar
September 15, 2011 at 7:24 AM
Very intersting take on the bubbles theme, very nice poem, well done.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 6:13 PM
CONGRATS JODIE ON A TERRIFIC THIRD PLACE WIN WITH THIS CREATIVE PIECE ON BUBBLES LUV..
Maverick Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 5:27 PM
Well conveyed Jodi, enjoyed.
Macmillan Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 10:40 PM
This one lingers after you read it... hangs in the air like those thought bubbles you write of. I like the uncomfortable feeling you've projected, like I've read someone's journal and I shouldn't have... intimate write earning a well deserved win. Congrats !! Cyndi
Susan Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 4:53 PM
i like your use of "blankets", "Curl of lip". great descriptive phrasing. congratulations on your win :)
Johnson Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 4:20 PM
Congratulations Jodi. Joyce
Brown Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 3:42 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Bubbles"contest Jodie. Love,Carol
Williams Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 3:19 PM
hey Jodie congrats on your superb win,..David
Devonshire Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Sad and very moving poem, Jodie. If only we could "conversee" in bubbles so we could ignore the ones that hurt us. Congratulations on your win in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 2:41 PM
Great work to be in the high place of honor..Congrats..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 2:06 PM
smashing offering,jodie.. speech that can;t be read--- what a tremendous visual! winning wishes with huggs! :) nette
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