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The Spectre of sex appeal by Salvador Dali 1934 On the right-hand bottom side, we see Dalí as a child, dressed as a sailor, observing his monstrosity I misunderstand, tell what is the plan As I change from juvenile into man Her formation intrigues and repulses Instead of control, there are impulses Her head morphs upon a backdrop mountain Sack cloth breasts, stem flow of sandy fountains Solid rock womb, born of imperfection The spectre miscarries, sans reflection Propped up and falls forward in painful lurch Composite pieces, on acceptance search Ossified limbs, mangled bone skewers stone Destined to experience life alone She poses in pain and reeks of decay I stand with a hoop, brought along to play Ignores my advances, falling apart I’ll return with barbed wire to bind her heart No more cushioned stumps or flailing crutches Unraveling her knots, where flesh touches I’ll fashion a cross and burial mound Existence fades as parts crash to the ground Parts don’t stay buried, so I light a fire Warm them back up, on a funeral pyre My god she’s beautiful, I’m overcome We join together in flames, curse undone

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Date: 2/26/2024 5:45:00 PM
Salvadore Dali is very fascinating, just like this poem. Thumbs up for this one.
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Date: 2/16/2024 6:45:00 PM
Hilarious, David, although plenty of both sexes are far from appealing. Creative, you are very witty! Pangie cx
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/17/2024 4:13:00 AM
Heya Pangie, It is definitely a weird painting, I can see why it would appear hilarious to conjure up such a spectacle, but to then paint it is pretty remarkable, I really enjoy trying to interpret the meaning behind some works, I love the creativity involved in this particular piece, but don’t really (have the hots) for the image lol! Cheers David
Date: 2/14/2024 12:45:00 PM
....nice one....perhaps dali portrays what it was like as a child to see and understand 'mother nature' who was apparently everywhere.....stan
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Date: 2/14/2024 12:56:00 PM
You could well be right Stan, I’m sure the guy had many influences in his life, but unlike most people he could visualise them in the abstract, then paint them on canvas, pure genius! if not a little warped lol! Cheers David
Date: 2/14/2024 11:42:00 AM
Such complexity within this David, I'm not sure I can improve on Anaya's comment. The reader/viewer goes from not knowing what to think through a torment of continual turmoil. The rights and wrongs all from an unknown source, perhaps society or from something else. Yet with recognition there's a different lens to view and a different view than how things appear. Confusing as is the point of surrealism and most definitely a challenging piece of art created to invoke a reaction.
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Date: 2/14/2024 12:29:00 PM
Heya Dilly, I actually had this as my screensaver on a PC some years ago, I’m sure people thought I was nuts, it was the sheer complexity of props and body parts that captured my imagination, he actually put the picture of himself (the boy with the hoop) in another painting 30 years later, so one can only imagine it meant a lot to him, yes with recognition and acceptance of the abstract, we are allowed to view these pieces through our own lens, thanks so much for a wonderful comment, cheers David
Date: 2/13/2024 11:16:00 PM
I admit I know nothing of Dali. Seeing his picture I was not impressed but then women have other attractions. As a poem, it is well written.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/14/2024 1:08:00 AM
Thanks Victor, Dali one of, if not the greatest surrealist of all time imo, although admittedly not everyone’s cup of tea, I myself am fascinated by the abstract world in general, still I’m delighted you appreciate the poem, cheers David
Date: 2/13/2024 9:21:00 PM
I'll gladly be the first to comment...The oil painting is a complex study. Sexual confrontation, through the surrealist’s child mind Through your perspective wowed me, imagery is realistic. The added human tragedy event is intense and disgusts and intrigues. The finale’s ritual performed and solution to his delusional mind was a grand masterplan, masterpiece by far, David.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 2/15/2024 8:38:00 AM
:)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/14/2024 12:10:00 PM
Thanks so much for the Fav, Dilly likes your comment below too, cheers again!
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Date: 2/14/2024 8:01:00 AM
Back to fav it!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/14/2024 1:00:00 AM
Heya Anaya, thank you for such balanced and very welcome critique, this one was always about interpretations, trying to get inside the mind of Dali certainly takes on many perspectives, this grotesque piece deserved a multifaceted masterplan, that paradoxically brings a real solution to his seemingly impossible surreal monstrosity, cheers David
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