Spectacular Acrostic

Sparks of breathtaking pleasure moans

Paint the night with luminous stars 

Embrace the unknown that invites and hold it tight

Captivation of a new language that gives it light

Twilight of romantic exquisite sweet poetry writes

Artist core of whirlpool flight on the surface insights

Cool glistening ocean blackness 

Under a canopy of materializing stars, inky water hearing the waves  

Lapping kissing your toes, 

A faint wind brush against the surface of your soul

Run the fickle pen and just let it flow into a spectacular ride


1/19/2016

- Poetry Contest: Spectacular Acrostic 

 Sponsored by: John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 30, 2016 at 1:37 AM
Eve, Congratulations on your wonderful win. X0X.... LINDA
Gibson Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Well done.
Cheema Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 7:42 PM
Artistically penned!Congrats on your well deserved placement, Eve!
Nunez Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Agree that only the word spectacular is appropriate, Eve. You were wonderful with the imagery here. Fantastic last line. Congrats! hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 1:35 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this spectacular write Eve.
Wigley Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 12:32 AM
I love the ethereal quality to this work, Eve, well done. Viv x
A  Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 12:44 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your Spectacular Acrostic winning poem. Hugs **SKAT**
Dutta Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Enchanting Poem. Congrats Eve to win. Hugs. Anisha
Lane Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 9:00 AM
well done, Eve. Congrats.
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 1:36 PM
Thank you, Lin :)
Hamilton Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 8:32 AM
Really well done EVE congrats on your 3rd place win!
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 1:31 PM
Thank you, John, for you placing my poem. Hugs Eve
Aniagyei Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Spectacular, indeed........ enjoyed this one, Eve!
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 1:30 PM
Thank you, Wifred, :)
Boddie Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:30 AM
a spectacular display of Life without dismay from the atlantic to the frisco bay inspiring Beauty in every way that can make our hearts sway into our pens each and every day....so spectacular eve....;)
Roper Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Thank you,Eric, I love the poetry you rain on me :) thank you Hugs Eve
Konos Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:05 PM
Great Title...It is indeed a Spectacular Acrostic......Congrats....
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Thank you, Judy, so very much. Hugs dear friend
Nance Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 7:03 PM
I think this is beautiful I can feel the artistic serenity!Love the rhyme and the beauty of it! :)
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:20 PM
I'm tickled that you like it, Casarah, thank you for your constant support. Hugs dear friend
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Great acrostic Eve I especially like the final letter:-) hugs Jan x good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Oh, my :( she might leave it open since she doesn't have the limit yet. I have not even started to do one for Shadow's I'm not in the mood for writing.
Allison Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 6:55 PM
I've part written a poem for Shadow's contest... have left it at work and I'm not due back in till Monday ... and I don't want to rewrite it!!! :-( hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Thank you, Jan, I've been working on it for 4 or so days and I still don't like it.I need to come and visit. Hugs
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