Spectacular


Sweet and wonderful the memories of childhood,
Painful, oh staggering to recall, Raddle-Dazzle, I would forget- if I could.
Endless, endless the days we spent riding in the magnificent wild,
Calm and peaceful your nature with this young dreamy child.
Tangled were those fantastic woods where we rode each day,
Adored and loved, I never wanted you to go away.
Carefree spirits, me and you,  we were daredevils seeking thrills,
Utopia for us was riding over the highest, farthest, most splendid hills.
Labyrinthine trees- rippling streams-  a breathtaking leap,
And aching, aching is my heart, I thought I had you to keep,
Raw, the death of my sensational, amazing horse, that I still weep.

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January 12, 2016

Poetry/Acrostic/Spectacular
Copyright Protected, ID 16-743-903-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest,  Spectacular Contest
sponsor,  John Hamilton

Fourth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 1/30/2016 11:42:00 PM
Broken, you are so kind, thank you for the nice reply to my comment. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. XoX LINDA
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Date: 1/31/2016 2:48:00 AM
Linda, thanks for all the comments on my poetry, appreciate so much xoxo !
Date: 1/30/2016 1:41:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. X0X.... LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 1/30/2016 8:38:00 AM
Linda, thanks so much for the congratulations and the wonderful !!!
Date: 1/24/2016 4:40:00 PM
This was beautifully different, Broken Wings; I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/24/2016 5:04:00 PM
Faye, thank you so much for the congratulations, what inspired me to write this theme is the death of 43 horses in Canada in a barn fire, it made me think of Raddle Dazzle and how much his death hurt and I thought imagine mourning the death of 43 beautiful horses ~
Date: 1/23/2016 7:57:00 PM
Touching! Congrats on your well deserved placement, Constance!
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Constance La France
Date: 1/23/2016 10:11:00 PM
Balveen, thank you so much !
Date: 1/22/2016 7:55:00 AM
Congrats dear BW on your placement. Wonderfully knit Acrostic....
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Constance La France
Date: 1/23/2016 12:21:00 AM
Archana, thanks so much for visiting, and the congrats and the wonderful ~
Date: 1/22/2016 1:41:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this spectacular write Broken.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/22/2016 5:22:00 AM
Upma, thanks much for the congratulations, appreciate ~
Date: 1/22/2016 12:39:00 AM
A sad but worthy tribute to a much loved friend, BW, well done. Viv x
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Constance La France
Date: 1/22/2016 5:25:00 AM
Viv, thanks for the congratulations, yes he was my friend !
Date: 1/21/2016 2:23:00 PM
Nice acrostic, BW...well done.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/21/2016 4:50:00 PM
Lin, thanks for visiting and for the well done, appreciate that ~
Date: 1/21/2016 12:47:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your Spectacular Acrostic winning poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Constance La France
Date: 1/21/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 1/15/2016 8:56:00 AM
Beautiful work with beautiful picture. Good luck in the contest. 7 i feel. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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Constance La France
Date: 1/15/2016 12:31:00 PM
Bl, thanks for the visit and the beautiful and the 7 and the love !
Date: 1/14/2016 10:42:00 AM
Beautiful! Beautiful, sooooooo beautiful. #7 truly underrates this piece. Great work friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2016 10:49:00 AM
Funom, thanks you so much for the beautifuls and the 7, I appreciate it soooooo much !
Date: 1/13/2016 8:36:00 AM
now surpassed what i imagined, this is great! well written...i hope that horse is white, i really like white horses, especially unicorns...excellent write BW, best of luck in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2016 12:05:00 PM
Sage, thanks for the excellent, I love white horses also but this one was dark velvet, so soft and gentle ~
Date: 1/12/2016 11:32:00 PM
Spectacular write, Broken Wing. Wow a winner!
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Date: 1/13/2016 7:46:00 AM
Eve, it breaks my heart to even read my own poem, I think it is spectacular, thanks for visiting and the wow and encouragement ~
Date: 1/12/2016 2:34:00 PM
spectacular...surprising...i hope you'll complete this, will be waiting to read the excellent words i see coming
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Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2016 7:46:00 AM
Come, come back, dear Sage and read my Spectacular poem ~
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Constance La France
Date: 1/12/2016 5:13:00 PM
lol, Sage, started it then got sidetracked, will let you know when complete..
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