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Sol reigns supreme in Earth’s solar space Planets orbit in a cosmic race Each determined never to embrace. Comet tails trail away from His face Tracing a path time will soon erase And mask its passage without a trace. Clouds are recipients of His grace Unhindered they roam from place to place. Luna has a way of giving chase An eclipse becomes her secret ace Resetting tides, to a lunar pace. (Acrostic) July 10, 2018

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Date: 7/10/2018 10:54:00 AM
Well done, Emile. Beautiful.
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