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'specks of White' - Tanka

canvass of color like a slide show changing a testimony of all my trials and heartache specks of white, healing power...

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James Fraser

Date: 2/12/2011 11:41:00 AM

You sure have delved deep for this inspiring piece Wilma. Have a wonderful evening....:)

Kash Poet

Date: 2/12/2011 11:17:00 AM

Deep thoughts penned here ,Wilma.Nice write---kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/12/2011 11:03:00 AM

Is this for the dream contest, Wilma? Wish I could interpret this for you, but just the fact that you find a "healing power" shows your strength and ability to overcome struggles. The canvas of color is most intriguing. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2011 9:08:00 AM

Lovely premise Wilma my friend.. a delicate read with powerful ending luv.. good luck in Michael's cool contest with this Tanka so fine.. with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/12/2011 4:14:00 AM

very intriguing dream, missy :) very cool how you say "slide show" here-- I hope your Saturday's been good :) hugs :)

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 2/12/2011 12:44:00 AM

wow! wonderful imageries, great flow of words in each line. Thanks for sharing this with us, please keep painting your poetry pad with the cute colours of creativity. Goodluck in the contest. Hope to read more from you. Have a great weekend dear friend! Love always, Adeleke.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2011 9:53:00 PM

Great imagery in yours,Wilma. I have no idea how he will chose from among all these very different kinds of dreams!! well, it's been a long night and off I go. Nice seeing you as I leave!! bye, sweetie.