Speakers

breaking through his defenses
          parents argue outside
                 words bleached
                 that wash to squalor his boyhood bubble
his angel missing in a roasted heat that strips wallpaper
                                                                                   politeness

he pins red wax lips on his teddy bear
              as curses breeze past like clouds de-coupling
his teddy bear who utters no evil
              can shift the narrative to anchor missing pieces
fake, furry therapist who hears a boy's words
                                                      whispered to the walls
                                                      that question clover living

stuffed animal toy in gallant wax lips that won't scream 
                                                                                     in neon
                                             that won't steal a child's game
                                             that won't gulp a bite of crazy
a telltale pleasure to draw a boy's belief to harbored 
                                                                            endings
to others,
                 rose-lipped,
                                  who'll
                                           speak 
                                                     a
                                                      different
                                                                     pitch








Poem composed: May 3, 2021
Open Poetry 4 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Schiavina Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations on such an originally unique poem on the joy of childhood toys. So simple and reflective.
Sambourne Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 5:35 PM
Thank you, Frances. Your thoughtful comments boost my day to pleasurable. Indeed, toys + play offer children an escape from family anger + dysfunction - it certainly did for me. Best wishes, Brian
Radice Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 1:49 PM
Hi Brian, I'm glad to see you are still writing, hard, real, true and powerful pieces of work such as this. All the better for it receiving a top place in a PS competition too. I'm intrigued by your writing style that I find helps me how I read the words amongst the pauses. I think this adds a certain intensity. Cheers - Gary
Sambourne Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Hi Gary, Most appreciative for your positive view of my submissions. I well understand that in a pandemic, poetry soupers often bypass gritty poems. But I write on. Folks such as yourself encourage + spur the muse. Many thanks, Brian
Alex Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 7:42 AM
My appreciation for your stop by + comment. Be well. Brian
Mcintosh Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 6:55 AM
Love this... I still remember my favorite teddy bear :) God bless you always, Love, Gina CONGRATS TOO
Sambourne Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Hi Gina, So thoughtful of you to comment. Do you remember the red wax lips once sold at candy counters? Baby sitting in my teens, I saw the 7 year old child (under my watch) put red wax lips on her teddy bear. Strange what images stay with us. Best wishes, Brian
Puddifoot Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 4:42 AM
no surprise to see you high on my winners' list again! you are so good at tackling the controversial, emotive subjects..i love the unusual phrasing in this, and the ending is particularly good - congrats on your win in my contest!
Sambourne Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 6:58 AM
Thank you Charlotte, for your affirmative response + high placement. Honestly, I thought my piece might make the top 10 but hope was not high. Poems with unusual wording + hard hitting topics often receive limited recognition. You are the exception. Thank you again. Be well. Brian
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