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Speak To Me

Out on the porch waiting for Your word Wanting You to just speak to me For Thee I wait with nature gird "From dawn to dusk I think of Thee" As the weight of the cloudy morn Presses down upon me, I plea Bless me today_I am reborn "From dawn to dusk I think of Thee" The sun is there hidden from view But tried to peek through red for me. I thought how each day you renew "From dawn to dusk I think of thee" To the brim fill me Lord because "From dawn to dusk I think of thee" Line in quotation marks: Written by Lonely Rider/in "Mellow Dreams" Started as a work for Gail's contest but not an entry.. This form is a Kyrielle Sonnet

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Date: 12/29/2012 6:39:00 PM
I enjoy kyriell sonnets and you did a good one here, SAra. I had to scroll down a ways but here I found a poem of yours I had not yet seen!
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Date: 12/27/2012 5:38:00 AM
Sara. Your choice of words when lettering your work is amazing. I love this poem, as I was reading it this scripture stuck in my mind Mathew 6:33
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Date: 12/16/2012 5:20:00 PM
This is awesome, Sara ;} ,,,, thank you for reading "Market Place" " you" were so right as I was thinking "sex trafficking" as I wrote. I left a note on that page as well for you;}
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Date: 12/11/2012 2:08:00 PM
Sarah, I like your poem and its humble reach to the Divine. Your format is solid too. Good job. Thanks for your nice comments about my Kindle of Lights poem. Yes, it does have a religious thought as well. I wrote especially from Debbie Guzzie's perspective, thus the last two lines.
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Date: 12/9/2012 8:45:00 AM
exciting words of inspiration ..luv those two last lines .. Sara .. so encouraging ..
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Date: 12/9/2012 7:28:00 AM
lovely spiritual write, Sara - love the form too. Congrats on all your wins, my friend.
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Date: 12/9/2012 6:28:00 AM
Inpirational and full of faith! Thank you!
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Date: 12/9/2012 2:16:00 AM
reborn again each day. hoping to hear words from above.. wonderful.. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 12/8/2012 10:14:00 PM
beautiful poem. i love the repetition. -JuliMichelle
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Date: 12/8/2012 1:17:00 PM
Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer BEAUTIFUL!!!! MEANINGFUL! LOVE IT!
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Date: 12/8/2012 11:55:00 AM
This is very beautiful Sara! I love this amazing and tremendous poem, filled with the Spirit this write is! I enjoyed reading this delightful and harmonious piece this afternoon! What a grand poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/8/2012 10:34:00 AM
Please, keep writing beautiful poems like this one!
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Date: 12/8/2012 7:24:00 AM
wonderful Sara, love the poem, and the form...
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Date: 12/8/2012 7:23:00 AM
He is thinking of you as well. I can not think of a better use of time. Well said Sara. I enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 12/8/2012 6:58:00 AM
Intense in its devotion,great write, Sara!! Jag
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Date: 12/8/2012 6:50:00 AM
Good job, Sara. I like it. Love ya, Toquyen
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Date: 12/8/2012 6:42:00 AM
This is POETRY!! - Beautiful written, Sara! - Hope you will get a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/8/2012 6:41:00 AM
Another good one Sara , really nice xx
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