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Speak No Evil

When crepuscular shadows loomed in a bay
to grate upon this opulent view’s grandeur,
my visceral thoughts reeled like windmills
where breaths heaved low, desultory the mind.
Gazing at Anger, doubts replayed a cynical past,
in lone sojourn...winds hummed,” speak no evil”
yet, penumbra of waves turned desultory.
Until a hundred stars bathed my eyes whole,
kindling exuberant rays, to console love’s blow;
and jealousy faded, in homage to a halcyon moment.


Silent One’s Contest
"see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil"
2/01/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raven Avatar
February 21, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Hi Nette, i do Love the emotional content of this write, the words drive it along. This has been well thought out and executed Nette. It is a definitely a seven for me and it goes into my faves, An excellent piece....Vlad.
Maverick Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 12:17 AM
Well it all got contained in the end Nette. I shall anticipate its 'breaking out' In some other piece..' well done))
A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Nette,, Congratulations on your "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten-word challenge WIN!" Love LINDA
Makama Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 8:30 AM
your words soften my heart like a damsel in need of a companion..... Your lines are sweeteners to a curious mind which is absolutely satisfied. There's this eagerness I have running to your pages and your reputation of meeting that expectation is beyond any form of appreciation or grading. Beyond 7 my friend!!
Martin Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Excellent! Loved your word usage!
Beaufort Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 6:10 PM
Oh what a tangled web we weave with these words. You are so positive in all this. It is remarkable.
A  Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 10:38 PM
Nette,, Congrats on your ten-word challenge WIN. ** SKAT **
Devnath  Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Beautiful poem. Congrats on your win my lovely friend,bl
Turner Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Congratulations, nette. I told you days ago this would be a winner. You deserve it.
Inman Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 7:40 AM
Very nice, Nette. You left me sedately pondering the strength that beauty has over my emotions.
Gentry Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 1:15 AM
Congratulations on your win! Good job.
Anish Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Jealousy - you write of that emotion like Blake did. Stimulating work here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Cheema Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 6:51 PM
Beautiful!Congrats on your well deserved placement, Nette!
Pinet Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 6:02 PM
The words are beautifully expressed in a sea of swirling phrases that dance upon the tongue. Very well written, congratulations. Emile.
Haight Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 5:47 PM
You did wonders using these difficult words, Nette! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations and well done, Nette!
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 5:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Enjoyed reading..It seems like it would not be so easy to write one for this contest..Thanks for your visit.Sara
Scars Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Nette, congrats on your placement! Well deserved lady *smiles* -luloo
Vaso Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:31 PM
This reminds me English poetry of the 18th century, loved the imagery, and the photo goes so well with the poem!
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 1:06 PM
- Great written, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marty Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Your voice rings in a startling, howling tone. Very creatively arranged!
Trifiatis Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 11:51 AM
Reading it is an adventure through the English language, dear nette! Fantastic!
Em Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Amazing! You weave a vivid picture in the readers' minds as your scolding language becomes tamed in time!
Turner Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 9:28 AM
Once again I am awed by your talent. Very intelligent use of some very challenging words. Good luck, nette.
Lalion Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Powerful poem! The image of a hurt soul growling angry words is stilled by some awakening. I like that!
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