Sparks of Electricity

   A blazing orange sun emits sparks
     setting against a blue-sky backdrop

   A surge of electricity in the soul
     as Pavarotti crosses the stage

   The crowd rises to its feet as one for the final time
     as the great Babe Ruth hits number 714

    I take your hand in mine...
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Brotherton Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 6:21 PM
oh, such a romantic my friend. Fantastic poem, Gershon.
Messina Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Hopefully she didn't think it was a foul ball (lol). ~CM
Lawless Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 6:27 AM
Oh, you little Valentine Vixen you.....
Jones Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 1:06 AM
Aw you are indeed a romantic:0)
M  Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 11:50 PM
Awww now thats romance right there BB! Lovely poem my friend! Debx
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 6:07 PM
Just my romantic id exploding past my super-id. lol.
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