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I've spanned these banks for many years, made evident in the rusty tin adorning my roof My sides are scarred , colors been stripped from angry storms through hundreds of seasons. My river bed ran dry back in late October then Winter snows frosted my planks but I was still fit for anyone crossing over from one side to the other of the Kanawha River. Come Spring, rushing water will flow under me splashing over rocks as it rushes to the sea. Bird droppings will build along each window sill when nest-building robins arrive in flocks. People walk across my wooden floor some hesitate before taking each step for my trusses tend to creak now and then and I swell in places; curses of growing old. I've been crossed by deer, hoofed by cows, wheeled over by bicycle's and horse-drawn buggies. They were all kinder than the smelly fumes spread by those disrespectful autos that never slow down. My weathered brows face North and South making me a tunnel for bold Nor'easters that swiftly tear through me and chip my paint. I like to think it enhances my pastoral character. I might be 'rickety,' but if you call me 'shabby' that rumbling you hear will be me grumbling. I'm proud of the state I'm in, physically sound and geographically, two miles outside of town. As long as I can stand on my supporting piers I'll relive memories made beneath my roof. A covered bridge spans more than the waters of the gentle river where life flows free beneath me. August 25, 2017

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Date: 8/27/2017 3:27:00 PM
Hi Lin, this write takes me back in time to a calmer, slower world, the kind of world i would have loved to live in. I do love the content in this one and i wish you luck in the contest. I hope this one does well. This brigde does live and breathe, what a life it must have led, what sights seen. A beautiful picture to go with your wonderful words. This covered bridge shall have more life, more memories to share. Has to be a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/28/2017 9:51:00 PM
Thanks so much for your kind comments, Mike.
Date: 8/26/2017 9:15:00 AM
What a great personification, Lin! Love the bridge you've chosen:) I like all things old and rusty;)
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Date: 8/26/2017 2:36:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Jo. I agree with you on liking shabby chic...lol
Date: 8/25/2017 2:26:00 PM
Glad I'm not that bridge lol...but your personification of it is superb Lin...best wishes a winner already...^WW^
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Date: 8/25/2017 5:43:00 PM
I appreciate your thoughts. W W...thank you.
Date: 8/25/2017 1:51:00 PM
Wonderful personification Lin and the image is absolutely gorgeous.. I don't write poems about bridges any more lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/25/2017 2:15:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I enjoyed being that lovely bridge except for the bird droppings. I read you loud and clear on your comments.
Date: 8/25/2017 9:46:00 AM
A terrific personification Lin. Covered bridges are beautiful.
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Date: 8/25/2017 10:23:00 AM
Yes, they are, Tim. This picture captured my attention and I thought it deserved a write. Thanks so much.
Date: 8/25/2017 8:59:00 AM
WOW--quite lovely! Good luck for the contest, Lin!!
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Date: 8/25/2017 10:22:00 AM
Thank you for the 'wow' and your well wishes, Vijay.

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