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Spaghetti Steps

Spaghetti Steps Slipping on slick steps Suzette's shoes shot into space Sits she on hot sanguine sauce May 7, 2020 7:45am PST Note! Each poet has choice to capitalize or not. Did research on this.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/7/2020 5:48:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, she sat on sauce! What a mess that would be. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs Darlene xxx-ooo.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/8/2020 8:40:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, it does not matter that you changed it. it is still a great poem. Enjoy your day my fiend. hugs Darlenexxx-ooo.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/7/2020 5:58:00 PM

Helloo Darlene! Imagine That..ker-Splat. This was fun to write. I chaged it to Alliteration, not a Haiku! Stiill..like it. Thank you Panagiota xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/7/2020 1:22:00 PM

Love how you done this Panagiota, Poor Suzette lol.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/7/2020 4:53:00 PM

Changed it to plain alliteration. Excuse my error. Sorry Tom Panagiota xxoo

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/7/2020 4:48:00 PM

suzette...,poor lass!) I am reclassifying it as an I do Not know. Please enjoy this day Panagiota xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/7/2020 12:44:00 PM

You project a hilarious image, Panagiota, though I admit I feel sorry for poor Suzette! Alliteration is also worthy of mention. Regards // paul

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/7/2020 12:51:00 PM

Hello Paul. Having slipped and fallen, done prat falls, it's a great feeling whilst airborne! But..oh the pain of landing. Alas, Suzette. The alliteration was fun, too. Many thanks, Paul...Panagiota xx

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/7/2020 11:48:00 AM

LOL Panagiota, well done...

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/7/2020 12:05:00 PM

A jolly Thursday be yours, Charlie. Glad you liked it! Thank you Panagiota xx