Spacious

immense intense absence suspense Beyond skies lies immense, intense space. Absence, suspense adds unknown to face.

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/14/2021 12:12:00 PM

Craftly done, Linda. Great poetry.~~

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/14/2021 2:56:00 PM

Thanks for your kind comments Victor. Nice to see you! Linda

David Kavanagh

Date: 1/13/2021 3:29:00 PM

Had to check you out Linda, after your visit to my page, tyburn style is not very familiar to me, but will be very well received by the seeker, your poem says an awful lot in so few well framed words, best of luck in the contest, cheers David

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/13/2021 3:38:00 PM

Backatcha David. Your skill and talent needs no luck however. It holds its own! :) My first try at a tyburn...I'm interested to see how it turns out. Many thanks for the visit and kind compliments. Linda

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/13/2021 2:25:00 PM

You describe space cleverly, Linda--its vastness is truly an unknown.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/13/2021 2:31:00 PM

Ah Vijay - many thanks my friend :) Linda

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/13/2021 8:40:00 AM

Hard to believe we are just a spec in its vastness Linda. Good luck in the contest Tom

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/13/2021 2:01:00 PM

Hi Tom. Yes, a spec. I wonder what/who is out there :) Thanks for the stop-by and read. :) Linda

Jan Allison

Date: 1/13/2021 8:17:00 AM

What a super poem I don't think I've attempted this form myself, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/13/2021 8:25:00 AM

Oh my! Thanks Jan! My first attempt at this form. I hope I've 'got' it. :) Thanks for the visit! Linda