Spaces-Pre-Emptive War Game

five,four,three,two,one coming...ready ..or..not

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Sharon Winter

Date: 12/8/2008 4:11:00 PM

Yes, you could take this two different ways. One an extremely frightening scenario, and then the other as a child's game. Fill in the space indeed. Love, Shar

Diane Christian

Date: 12/8/2008 10:29:00 AM

aww cute, reminded me of when w eused to play hide and seek, my husband likes playing reign of fire its kind of fun and bloodreign. anyway God bless love diane

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/8/2008 6:43:00 AM

This could be the countdown for something as serious as war...(God, help us!).......or something as carefree as playing 'Hide and Go Seek' as children. Let us pray it is always the innocent game children play. ~ Carrie

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/8/2008 3:07:00 AM

Man, is anyone ever 'ready' for this? I hope and pray we never have to know the answer. a frightening write, Brian. love, Kristin

Sean Kelly

Date: 12/8/2008 1:24:00 AM

Sounds like a perfect response to Fred's " Mysterious Man " ...... Tissues , at the ready , please .......