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Spaces-Pecking Order

Sparrow on the bird table the hawk has a feast

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/6/2008 4:48:00 PM
Poor Sparrow Naughty hawk. That's life. Blessings Michael
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Date: 12/6/2008 1:16:00 PM
Yeah, I supose that's like, pecking order for sure. love them both, love, Kristin
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Date: 12/6/2008 12:10:00 PM
Oh gosh, I just always feel sorry for the underdog. I love Sparrows as much as I love Hawks. Well, your title says it all. Well done. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/6/2008 9:29:00 AM
Whoa! That one made me blink. It's perfectly written, and the title is so fitting! I still haven't had the courage to write one of these, but I'm pondering it! ~Juliane
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