Spaces-Overnight

snowfall in the dell spring blossom dies

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Sharon Winter

Date: 3/3/2009 9:42:00 AM

Well, it has happened here too, but do not despair. Spring shall soon give birth to a multitude of new life. Strange for March, but it does happen. Perfect write for this form. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/3/2009 7:16:00 AM

Yes...that is happening here too!! A clear picture! Nice one ~ Carrie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/3/2009 5:19:00 AM

Beautiful, Brian! This is another very interesting and lovely form that says so much with so few words. Wonderful imagery! Love, Robin

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/3/2009 4:20:00 AM

Another beauty of a piece from you Brian..so little said yet so strong.

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/3/2009 1:06:00 AM

Are we still at the " sleepover " ?? .. No !!

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/2/2009 11:52:00 PM

Such beauty does die overnight, Nice thoughts...Raul