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Space or Spaced Out

In Space or Spaced Out Bones grow feeble without gravity This is a serious matter, not to be taken lightly Blood fails to reach the brain We must bear this in mind Space cannot be navigated by the light headed The semi conscious, on a journey with such a faint map Think on this seriously, it is not a joke Spaceships lost in the heavens is a hellish consequence Sentient beings drifting half conscious is senseless Concentrate your thoughts so that we do not scatter Debris in the galaxies, cleverly made And stupidly lost.

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Date: 2/19/2016 1:48:00 PM
Dear Chrissie Love how your mind works, you've got talent my new friend and this work shows it brilliantly, awesome work wish to read more in the future, cheri and thanks for visiting my site, I appricate feedback, cheri d.
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Chrissie Morris Brady
Date: 2/19/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/17/2016 5:07:00 PM
Fabulous piece of writing Chrissie. Do you have more?
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:14:00 PM
Yes. Some are published others are submitted for publication. I have to be careful what I put on here....
Date: 2/11/2016 1:10:00 PM
Enjoyed very much this delightful poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 2/7/2016 1:14:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem, Chrissie! Thanks for your visit today!
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Date: 2/7/2016 12:34:00 PM
I have reasonable doubts Man will ever achieve space travel, long-distance, I mean. I think of the millions of dollars spent trying to achieve it, while millions more on earth could benefit from that money. I am a science buff, so your poem appealed to me very much. Best to you. And thanks for the stop by. / M
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Date: 2/7/2016 12:46:00 PM
Thank you! I hope the contradictions and word play appealed to you as well.
Date: 1/30/2016 11:34:00 PM
Hi Chrissie,, you are so kind, thank you for the nice reply to my comment. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. XoX LINDA
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Date: 1/30/2016 6:03:00 PM
CHRISSIE, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Always & Forever! LINDA
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Date: 1/30/2016 6:07:00 PM
Thank you. It's an honor and such a complement. Thanks for dropping by to be so kind. Chrissie
Date: 1/24/2016 8:57:00 PM
Cleverly made and stupidly lost. Such is life and death it seems. Thanks.
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Chrissie Morris Brady
Date: 1/25/2016 9:19:00 AM
Life is not always stupidly lost - I don't think so anyway. The poem is word play and contradictions if you hadn't realised. Thank you for reading.
Date: 1/21/2016 4:08:00 PM
something different to think about when thinking of space travel. It had not entered my mind before!!
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Date: 1/21/2016 4:47:00 PM
LOL. It is mostly word play, but inspired by a passing comment my brother in law made...
Date: 1/21/2016 2:57:00 PM
Welcome to Soup with this impressive offering, Chrissie. Word-play has served you well! Congrats on POTD! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/21/2016 3:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul. Regards, Chrissie
Date: 1/21/2016 3:12:00 AM
Hey Chrissie such a beautiful poem and am glad its chosen as poem of the day too!!!! excellent! keep it up!!!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 1/21/2016 8:11:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 1/20/2016 11:42:00 AM
Beautifully painted piece Chrisie congratulations on poem of the day interesting pen
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Date: 1/20/2016 12:15:00 PM
Thank you Liam! It's word play...
Date: 1/20/2016 10:14:00 AM
Hi Chrissie, thank you for reading my poem. Guess Who :) I hope to see you post a new poem soon. LINDA
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Date: 1/20/2016 9:24:00 AM
Chrissie, congratulations on poem of the day! Welcome to Soup
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Date: 1/20/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve!
Date: 1/20/2016 9:19:00 AM
Hey Chrissie, a warm and hardy welcome to Poetry Soup and a BIG congratulations on your first poem being chosen for POTD!! I look forward to enjoying more poems from you - and there are so many wonderful poets here to encourage you. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 1/20/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thank you Neva! I am surprised and delighted!!
Date: 1/20/2016 8:58:00 AM
Chrissie, congratulations on having this wonderful poem selected as Poem Of The Day, enjoy the honor ~
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Date: 1/20/2016 9:02:00 AM
Thank you! I really am!! Thanks, it's given me a much needed boost...
Date: 1/20/2016 5:45:00 AM
Congrats on POTD...... deserving!
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Date: 1/20/2016 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 1/20/2016 3:53:00 AM
- Congratulations Chrissie with the title: P. O. T. D. !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2016 7:35:00 AM
Thank you! hugs back :)
Date: 1/19/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you everyone for your kind comments! You are all amazing!
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Date: 1/19/2016 4:31:00 AM
- Welcome to P- Soup with your great first poem, Chrissie :) - Here you will find heartily warmth, and meet many great poets - A meeting place for inspiration, growth and pleasure for your words and thoughts - I wish you every success - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2016 11:38:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! I'm happy to be here. You're very kind.
Date: 1/18/2016 9:01:00 PM
Hi Chrissie,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Chrissie Morris Brady
Date: 1/19/2016 11:42:00 AM
You are so kind. I look forward to reading your poetry too. My friendship is returned - glady.
Date: 1/18/2016 6:16:00 PM
Chrissie, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Chrissie Morris Brady
Date: 1/19/2016 11:44:00 AM
So kind of you! I look forward to reading poetry from others and finding my way around. Thank you for your friendship!