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Space On Pace To Eclipse Past

SPACE ON PACE TO ECLIPSE PAST Stars, Mars, New moon, Spoon, Full moon, In Bloom Sun – fire Sends warmth To planet earth Orbiting its girth, Space, Race, Milky Way, Here to stay, Satelites, Bright, Debris, Flys free, Space station, Creating a nation, Americans Russians, Enter discussions, Ticket to Mars, no return, Admiration earn, Want to join, Flip a coin, Other planets, Maybe only granite, Space cruise, Include your muse, Now Fly high, Above the sky!

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/22/2019 5:36:00 AM

"Ticket to Mars, no return". I was interested at first, but the no return part makes me wonder why? Is this a trick? Who would go under those conditions? I can think of no one. Thank you for inspiring me today to write a poem about it.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/29/2019 2:47:00 AM

Hello Jennifer … unique and straight to the point. Nicely presented as well - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/29/2019 11:07:00 AM

Hi Lindsay, And people are going to Mars on a one way ticket! Good choice - avoid dying because of pollution or lack of water, bad choice, as once you are on that space ship you cant change your mind! Thanks for a great comment Lindsay, Hugs, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/23/2019 3:43:00 AM

Fun one. Felt as if space traveling as I moved from line to line. :) gw

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/23/2019 8:58:00 AM

Just felt I needed a different way of writing this poem - glad you enjoyed your space trip Gershon - you can still catch a one way ticket to Mars???!!! Poetry hugs Jennifer

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/23/2019 8:48:00 AM

Hi Gershon thank-you for your lovely comment - have you booked your one way ticket to Mars???!!1 - 7 months to get there, and we will one day die there. Brave people, pioneers, I applaud them - but not my cup of tea! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/22/2019 4:05:00 PM

Nice space travel piece Jennifer, makes one wonder about space travel. Fine writing! Blessings always,Gordon

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/23/2019 1:04:00 AM

Hi Gordon, the option for a one way ticket is there, but families are left behind, so you and I couldn't do this!. Thank you for a great comment, poetry hugs, Jennifer

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 4/21/2019 4:49:00 PM

Debris If you think about it Jennifer ?? Everyone & Everything Is merely Big Bang Debris In Space Moving at individual Pace

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/25/2019 5:49:00 PM

Why should we have to move to Mars ? All the dead weight and debris would only follow us anyway

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/22/2019 1:58:00 AM

But imagine if some of this debris decides it wants to visit plane earth - it could take out, thousands of people. Maybe best we go on a one way ticket to Mars! Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Thanks for a very relative comment Christopher.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/21/2019 12:31:00 PM

one day, we will all tour mars and discover realms beyond our milky way... a brilliant piece, jen... huggs

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/21/2019 1:17:00 PM

I can only imagine the excitement of the people chosen to go to Mars in 2024 or 2025 - it sounds unreal that you say goodbye to your whole family forever! There are two S.African women on the passenger list I understand. Thank-you for a brilliant comment my friend - poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/21/2019 1:09:00 AM

A timely contemporary piece of our Earth Jennifer. I love your presentation! Have a blessed Easter my friend. : ) xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/21/2019 2:29:00 AM

Hi Connie, Lovely to hear from you on Easter Day - a blessed Easter to you and your family dear friend - glad you enjoyed my poem - poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/20/2019 7:37:00 PM

Let it all hang out...I like the vibe...

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/21/2019 12:50:00 AM

Hi Arturo - Happy Easter - the vibe is kinda catchy! A Blessed day, hugs, Jennifer

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/20/2019 2:37:00 PM

A unique manner of rhyming, Jennifer; I loved it!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/21/2019 12:47:00 AM

Thank-you Ralph, I love that you loved my poem! Happy Easter to you and yours. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/20/2019 7:48:00 AM

Yes--the race is on.. to go beyond..I feel the journey in your write, Jennifer.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/20/2019 8:15:00 AM

Hi Vijay, there is a sense of urgency to this race, unfortunately the tickets will be exorbitantly expensive so i guess film stars, football stars, sports stars and of course Donald Trump and the likes will benefit first and foremost. Glad you felt the journey in my poem, maybe they could employ us as cabin crew!!! Poetry hugs, Jennifer

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/20/2019 4:47:00 AM

Sometimes a one way ticket to mars is tempting with all the problems in our world. There is talk of such a project. Space though facinates me. Tom

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/20/2019 5:25:00 AM

Hi Tom, Yes there is, three S. Africans have applied and have been chosen to go to Mars - ages varying from 22 - 45. An adventurous move. Thank-you for the comment. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.