Space

Delving into space
Man will soon realize his
Insignificance

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John Freeman

Date: 4/20/2010 12:19:00 PM

Awesome haiku Joyce, yes won't man know then.Lol. Yes I had the same problem this morning, but if you keep signing in it will stop shutting you out after awhile. Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/17/2010 5:10:00 PM

great thoughts, enjoyed!

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/17/2010 2:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your 2nd place wing for "Captivated" I will have it sent to me so I may read it-all my communications is done via postal mail..R u on FB? Jimmy

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/17/2010 2:42:00 PM

man is NOt a quick study LOL now is he? good one! Light & Love

Tim Ryerson

Date: 4/17/2010 11:51:00 AM

Ah yes, Joyce!... We humans tend to arrogantly think the universe is centered around us when we are just tiny specks of dust in God's grand scheme (somehow I find that thought comforting) - Tim

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/12/2010 4:45:00 PM

I sometimes wonder, dear Joyce!! Awesome Haiku!! I wish you good luck in the contest..even though you don't need it really...And thanks for reading and posting your always kind comments on my poems...Love, audrey

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/12/2010 3:04:00 PM

Hey Joyce, Thnx for leaving your kind comments on my piece...it means a lot to me..Jimmy

Constance La France

Date: 4/11/2010 7:03:00 PM

Wow, powerful, it does not get any better than this.. best of luck.. love constance

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/11/2010 2:01:00 PM

very nice so true they just don't get it loved it faleshia

Cecil Hickman

Date: 4/10/2010 11:48:00 PM

wishing you all the best in the contest,,your words took the path that I almost did,, a very deep piece which probably also shall ring true,,,and thank you for visiting my words and leaving yours behind,,,Blessings..Cecil

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2010 10:17:00 PM

I take it this is for that contest? I wish I could think of something to say about that picture!! Guess I am not a stars person. Good mesage you wrote with this one, Joyce!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/10/2010 8:00:00 PM

Wish all the best in the contest. Fine images

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/10/2010 7:23:00 PM

Very true, Joyce! This haiku is outstanding! Best wishes for success in Gareth's contest. Love, Carolyn

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/10/2010 6:43:00 PM

Wise words and message. well done Joyce a great entry I think....Margaret

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 4/10/2010 6:18:00 PM

Solid, my dear. It reminds me of the final line in a truly good science fiction film from 1957. The Incredible Shrinking Man. " To God, there is no zero." Now they're REMAKING that, TOO! Good God! Stop! But thank you so much for your kind remarks. When you have suffered as much verbal abuse and some physical as I did, ANY praise is like water flowing in the desert. You are very kind. Thank you! Gerard.