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Souvenirs De La Mer

Soothing sliding silvered tides, fields of verdant; rolling co-inside..' Beards of algae flow on wrecks, phosphorescence guilds the whitecap in flecks, As a mirror shattered myriad shines, to uneven waves that crash in; times..' Un-counted amounts of wash elapsed, endless etchings have surfs out; scratched.. I see the glimpses I hear that noise, in awe; I observe the power and poise, Atlantic grey-green, Indian serge, pacific hued, I need to re-visit & become re-clued The saline reeks, there are nets of fish, tootling tugs, low tide rippling in meek.' Memories crowds... Of golden sands..' Ice cream, picnic baskets; beer and bands..'

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Date: 9/26/2015 8:52:00 PM
Oh I love the alliteration in the first line and the wonderful imagery of the sea which leaves me feeling quite nostalgic. I feel a little sea fever coming on:-)! Very beautiful piece! Pandita
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Date: 8/12/2015 4:36:00 PM
A brilliant piece full of vibrant imagery and excellent phrasing. A feast for ALL the senses. Well done my friend... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 7/15/2015 2:43:00 PM
You have outstanding imagery my old and good poetic friend JOE, sounds like a memorable date. Awe.... LINDA
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Date: 6/7/2015 9:27:00 AM
Love your excellent imagery, Joe! The sea is forever magnetic, alluring. Enjoyed your internal rhyme! // paul
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Date: 5/23/2015 12:57:00 PM
Very creative work..I enjoyed reading the very descriptive work describing an ocean view..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 5/21/2015 10:54:00 AM
Love the images you have created in my mind, Mav. Gives this reader nice feels. Kim
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Date: 5/20/2015 7:26:00 AM
End of lines don't rhyme... That's where the rhyme has to be to account for the form, not in the middle of a line.
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Date: 5/19/2015 8:27:00 PM
Joe I think your poem is so moving well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem today
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Date: 5/19/2015 1:49:00 AM
Very good, but it isn't a rhyme, but verse.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 5/19/2015 5:53:00 PM
I meant your interest was welcome, once again best wishes, Joe..'
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Joe Maverick
Date: 5/19/2015 5:51:00 PM
1st part Tides.. Co-inside 2nd part wrecks... Flecks 3rd part Shines.. Times 4th part Elapsed...Scratched 5th part Noise..... Poise 6th part Hued ......Re clued 7th part Reeks ..... Meek 8th part Sands...... Bands surely overall its rhyme, many thanks 'anyway' Julia for the comment best wishes Joe..' and interest
Date: 5/18/2015 7:20:00 AM
Nicely penned Joe....great imagery
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:39:00 PM
Hey, did you put this in the contest Memories of the sea? I think it would fit very nicely in that contest. You really gave a good description of images from the sea, Joe!!
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Date: 5/11/2015 2:54:00 PM
Cher poete, je recois le mal de mer dans ce vaste ! Pourtant je vous a travers vos yeus poetique, beaute'. A beautiful write sir. Have a wonderful week.....much love, james
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Date: 5/10/2015 5:38:00 PM
what incredible imagery and stunning alliteration Joe! Such i vivid image I could almost see smell and hear the sea:-) Hugs jan xx
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