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Worthy

beyond words

Warm, Wavy and Wild

Southern, Symmetrical and Shapely

 

~ Oh, those satisfying sensations ~

                 you give me

 

A

Bountiful Ballad

Blissful, yet Simple

Sophisticated-- (dedicated to you)

 

~ Oh, those satisfying sensations ~

                 you give me

 

Sipping

on Syllables,

Sultry-- (delicious too)

very Suggestive and Stimulating

 

~ Oh, those satisfying sensations ~

                 you give me

 

You:

(repeatedly indulge)

- in Nectarous Nouns,

Invigorating my Vocal Vocabulary

 

 

~ Oh, those satisfying sensations ~

                 you give me

 

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   (Swept away in Sentences)

* Because Verbs Vibrate *

Southern and Symmetrical

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Worthy
beyond words
Warm, Wavy and Wild
Southern, Symmetrical and Shapely

~ Oh, those satisfying sensations ~
                 you give me

A
Bountiful Ballad
Blissful, yet Simple
Sophisticated-- (dedicated to you)

~ Oh, those satisfying sensations ~
                 you give me

Sipping
on Syllables,
Sultry-- (delicious too)
very Suggestive and Stimulating

~ Oh, those satisfying sensations ~
                 you give me

You:
(repeatedly indulge)
- in Nectarous Nouns,
Invigorating my Vocal Vocabulary


~ Oh, those satisfying sensations ~
                 you give me


-----------------------------------


  (Swept away in Sentences)
* Because Verbs Vibrate *
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Thomas Avatar
February 24, 2025 at 9:34 PM
mmm... nostalgic. I so enjoyed your wordplay Brandy; metaphoric musings were once a favorite of mine.
Nicole Avatar
February 27, 2025 at 6:54 PM
The wordplay within certainly creates a beautiful mood. It just happened that way. So happy you enjoyed this simple, yet sensual scribble of mine. Your thoughts bring a smile, FJ. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Ramel Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 10:03 PM
Nectarous Nouns....I love that...this poem takes me back to my time in North Carolina, and the girl in the flannel shirt :)
Nicole Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 4:55 PM
Nouns are like that, sometimes. :) Thank you Michael, for your lovely comment. Oh, my ! Sounds like a beautiful moment and memory. :) My best to you. :) Brandy
Rodgers Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 12:13 PM
Dear Brandy, your poem is an exquisite celebration of language and its myriad sensations. The alliteration and imagery cascade beautifully, evoking a sensory feast for the reader. Your words dance with warmth, wildness, and sophistication. Your poetic prowess shines brightly. Keep indulging us with your linguistic delights. - Blessings, Daniel
Nicole Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 4:50 PM
Dear Daniel, within are emotions and moments that describe me and my personality. I'm simple, yet sensual and sophisticated, all at the same time. Your thoughts are soft, elegant and so beautiful. My heart is smiling, my dear friend. Thank you for all your kind words and compliments. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kendrick Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 4:37 AM
Very provocative work you have penned in this one about poetry and poetry writers. Your creative hand adds a different flavor to soup. Keep on writing. Sara K
Nicole Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 7:14 PM
Dear Sara, you're right about this being provocative. This is about my muse and the sensual inkwell she dips into. I appreciate you, your lovely comment and compliment. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Lindley Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 9:17 AM
Sultry, sensational, symmetry and even a bit sexy and sassy. "" Her shape was lovely sexy and so sensational. Every time I saw her I got emotional. Her lips o' so, so truly delicious and divine. I thank our blessed Lord she is so truly mine.""......... A definite fav, your words are also magical my friend. A fav..
Lindley Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 6:53 AM
Thank you my good friend!
Nicole Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 6:27 PM
Oh, my ! :) You're absolutely right, the picture is very sexy.
Nicole Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 6:26 PM
Dear Robert, your comment is breathtaking. So soft, sensual and poetic. My heart is fluttering and I'm blushing, all at the same time. Thank you my dear friend, for sharing your lovely thoughts. I appreciate you placing this in your favorites as well. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Lindley Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 9:18 AM
O' YES, the picture is so sexy. Robert
Baker Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:56 PM
A lovely poem with repeating last line in each verse. This poem was very sumptuous, Brandy. So down home and cozy. Thanks for sharing my friend. Bill
Nicole Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 7:30 PM
Thank you, Bill. I felt the repeating of this line helped create the beautiful mood within, that I was wanting to express. It's 'down home and cozy,' while being 'sumptuous' too. I like that. :) Your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you, my friend from Texas. :) Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 10:40 PM
Outstanding poetry and quite sensuous too, dear Brandy. As I read your poem, the image of a butterfly flitting happily around opening blossoms and sipping nectar joyously comes to my mind. Well done dear friend.
Nicole Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 4:59 PM
Dear Valsa, so sweet of you to say my poetry is outstanding. (My heart is smiling). You're right my dear friend, about this being sensual. The image you paint is beautiful, yet playful and passionate, all at the same time. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Richards Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 11:42 PM
A very enticing poem and one can't help but to hang onto every word, Bandy. Each verse a feast.
Nicole Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 5:51 PM
I'm in awe with you saying each verse is a feast. Thank you Suzette, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Slaughter Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 10:14 AM
Love it all, Brandy...especially "Sipping on syllables".
Nicole Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 6:24 PM
Thank you, Jim. Syllables are savory and sweet. You and your kind words are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
Roper Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 9:29 AM
Lovely verse, Brandy. Your spicey words fulfilling. Blessings my friend
Roper Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 12:04 PM
Your awesome
Nicole Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 4:19 PM
Thank you, Eve. Spice and everything nice. :) I'm happy you enjoyed these words of simple simplicity. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Scorpio Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:00 PM
I'm going to go have a cigarette and come back and read this again wow! A.S.
Nicole Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 6:28 PM
Oh, my ! I'm breathless. This means my words left you completely satisfied. Now it's my turn to say, wow ! Thank you, A.S. :) Brandy
Trifiatis Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 10:02 AM
Outstanding, dearest Brandy! Congratulations!
Nicole Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 7:00 PM
You're so kind, Demetrios. Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you for your kind words. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 9:35 AM
Oooh a saucy sensational poem , enjoyed this sexy muse. Kudos! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Nicole Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 6:39 PM
Sometimes, the muse enjoys being surrounded by soft sensations. Thank you, S. zaynab. I appreciate your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy
Puddifoot Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:53 AM
love the originality of this! a cascade of alliteration, very sensual too..thanks for your kind comment on my work.:)
Nicole Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 7:40 PM
Charlotte, I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Soft moments and sensuality linger within. You're very welcome. My best to you. :) Brandy
DiMino Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 8:30 AM
You get a FAVE from me, Brandy. Beautiful and Classy!
Nicole Avatar
February 18, 2023 at 8:28 PM
Thank you Joe, for placing this in your favorites. I appreciate you saying this about my poem. You are so sweet. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Watt Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Brandy, you are an artist with your soft and flowing rivulets of suggestive sensuality. Your patterns and shapes are musical in their rhythms and symmetry, and add so much to the message of gentle passion and desire. It's always a very satisfying sensation to read and visualize your artistry. I especially enjoyed your alliterations: "sipping on syllables", "nectarous nouns", and "because verbs vibrate". Nice to see your muse has paid you a whispering visit; another Fav for me. Happy Valentine's Day - hope all is well in Brandyland. Hugs ~ John
Nicole Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 7:34 PM
John, after writing "Parallel Poetry" and patiently waiting for my muse to arrive- soft syllables began to satisfy my senses. It was then that I knew, this playful poem of passion would emerge. I'm in complete awe with all your kind words and compliments. Thank you so much. Every once and a while my muse comes out of hiding. I appreciate you placing this in your favorites, my dear friend. Happy Valentine's Day to you. Life is keeping me busy. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kiser Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 2:41 PM
Super alliteration in this piece; flows so well and is a beautiful read.
Nicole Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 6:21 PM
Thank you, M. L. You and your thoughts are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Gentile Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 5:16 AM
Sensuality abounds Brandy! Your ability to create the softness and serenity of romance is amazing! Happy Thursday xxoo
Nicole Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 6:42 PM
Thank you, Mike. You're making me blush, saying my creative ability is amazing. I'm just a simple woman that enjoys the playful side of art. Happy Thursday to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Callus Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 9:01 AM
You certainly know how to sweep your readers off their feet, Brandy...and you do it tactfully, teasingly and suggestively, without going overboard. The choice of adjectives and verbs, plus the intentional use of alliteration serves you to the full. The power of words vibrates and echoes long after we read and unwillingly depart. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
Nicole Avatar
February 9, 2023 at 6:19 PM
Paul, you have taken my breath away, with your lovely comment and all your compliments. (You have swept me off my feet). Thank you for saying I'm able to write playful poetry, in such a tasteful way. It's about satisfying all the senses, softly and sweetly, yet with passion. I appreciate you and your kindness. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Wolf Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 7:24 PM
I notice that most of the comments are from males here. Hmmm. I wonder why. lol... Sultry to the max, Brandy. :) gw
Nicole Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 6:34 PM
Smiling at you. (It seems that way) And your comment makes one more. :) I'm in complete awe with you saying, "Sultry to the Max". Thank you, Gershon. My best to you. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 2:53 AM
Oh sweet Brandy, your nectarous nouns certainly make my verbs vibrate with many satisfying sensations. Your Southern symmetry is suggestive and stimulating. Keep that sweet nectar flowing. Hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 6:14 PM
John, your thoughts make my heart flutter and I'm blushing. There's so many satisfying sensations within this playful scribble of mine. This happens when syllables softly sigh. You and your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Tor Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 12:45 PM
Brandy I had to take a deep breath after reading. Your creativity and dialed down passion exentuates this poem anyways. Love everything about this. Your poems are always filled with underlying passion and a romantic air about them. This one is a favorite.
Nicole Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 7:05 PM
Michael, that makes two of us. (I'm breathless with your thoughts). Magical moments, romance and playful passion are easy for me, in poetry. Thank you for your lovely comment, and for placing this in your favorites. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Messina Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 7:02 PM
Oh Brandy, your poetry is absolutely gorgeous, sublime and heartfelt. I second what Edward stated.. "You are a gifted poetess", dear friend. Thanks also for your lovely comments on my POTD! So much appreciate you.. Love & hugs Charlie
Nicole Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 6:54 PM
Charles, when I see a comment about me being a "gifted poetess," my heart flutters and I blush. I'm not anyone special, and I don't have a golden pen. I appreciate the compliment, more than words can express. You're very welcome, my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Ibeh Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 8:19 PM
Absolutely sublime, Brandy:-) You're such a gifted poet.
Nicole Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 6:39 PM
Awe, thank you Edward. I'm just a simple poetess that enjoys connecting paragraphs- one word at a time. Your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Chuuk Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 8:33 PM
WOW! Sensationally beautiful.
Nicole Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 6:55 PM
I'm savoring those sensations. Very satisfying, indeed. Your thoughts bring a smile. Thank you, Fin. :) Hugs, Brandy
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