South Paw Babe Ruth

Silence hushed, a crowd in awe,
Only crickets could be heard.
Under the spell of the Babe,
They looked to where he pointed,
Hoping to see a home run. 

Perhaps the greatest player
America ever-knew,
Would, once again, please the crowd.

But the pitcher wasn't phased,
And threw a wicket screwball.
Babe watched its winding approach,
Eyed it close, took aim, and swung.

Resounding off of his bat,
Unfailingly, the ball flew.
Then, as the home crowd cheered on,
Headed straight for its target.


(Acrostic)


5/19/2015			


12/21/2022
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Gauthier Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 9:21 PM
Awesome tribute. I could feel the atmosphere in the stadium. A beauty! No... a homerun for you, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 8:35 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 2:16 PM
Great Acrostic poem, Emile, and a wonderful write on the famous BABE to address the theme! Congratulations on your win! Sandra
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 8:33 AM
Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your kind visits. Emile.
Merryman Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Great acrostic, Emile! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Pinet Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 7:03 AM
Thanks Kim, as always I appreciate your visits. Emile.
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May 25, 2015 at 5:40 PM
EMILE, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA
Pinet Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 7:14 PM
Thanks as always Linda. Emile.
Smith Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 12:01 PM
This a great story on "The Babe"....congrats Emile
Pinet Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 2:30 PM
Thank you Tim, as always your comments appreciated. Emile.
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May 25, 2015 at 1:15 AM
Emile :) Congratulations, Love SKAT
Pinet Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 9:09 AM
SKAT, once more I'm in your debt, thank you so much. Emile.
Guzzi Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 8:21 PM
So glad to see this one about Babe! Congrad's Light & Love
Pinet Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 9:08 AM
Thanks Debbie, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Roberts Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 7:00 AM
nice read, though I know nothing about baseball. I wrote about Joe DiMaggio....well done...Seren
Pinet Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 8:38 AM
Thanks Seren, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 4:12 PM
Hurrah for the BABE. Did you do this for Batter up contest. GREAT example of a poem for that one. ME LIKES (thanks also for always making such sweet comments)
Pinet Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 6:16 PM
Thanks Andrea, yes this was written for that contest, wish me luck. Emile.
Das Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 10:25 AM
A superb acrostic on a legend. A great one for the contest. From me it's 7.
Pinet Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 10:44 AM
Thanks as always Nandita, you never leave me with a frown. Emile.
Konos Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 9:13 AM
A BIG OLD 7....wow...EXCELLENT...
Pinet Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 10:45 AM
Thanks so much Judy, you're an angel. Emile.
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