South Carolina

I left the old me on the South Carolina sand.
The naive, sensitive, fragile girl stayed on that land.
I signed my life away for a greater good out there.
Sacrificed what I was to become someone better.
I left that place as someone unrecognizably new.
Stronger, braver, not someone easily subdued.
South Carolina kept all that I was before.
I clawed, and carved away until that wasn’t me anymore.
If I went there a piece of clay,
I was a slab of marble when I went away.
I’ll not forget South Carolina and what I left behind,
The battles won and lost are branded inside my mind.
South Carolina, South Carolina, I still feel the sun.
Though much time has passed and those days are done.
I still think of that summer and laugh, smile, and cry.
Sometimes it feels like no time has gone by.
But I left who I was back in South Carolina,
I gave that person up the day I arrived in South Carolina.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Mckeithan Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 6:46 PM
Great poem. It would make a wonderful ballad.
Jones Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 3:59 PM
As a North Carolina resident I’m biased but I like this and think it’d be a great song!
Bass Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 3:18 PM
Wonderful poem!
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