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Source of Our Awareness

We know we are alive,
but are we living.
When bad or good thoughts arise,
they can take our body over.
Our emotions can be as fickle as our thoughts,
emotions loose and running wild.
Are we even aware of what is going on,
our body~mind should be one.
God created us,
we live from birth till death on His timetable.
Our body houses our soul,
the soul is the working part for our life.
Our awareness or lack of,
helps to make us who we are.
Date Written:1/19/2023

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Date: 1/20/2023 2:08:00 PM
This is quite true, well-penned of what it is to be human.
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Date: 1/19/2023 5:39:00 PM
There is a lot of truth packed within your poetry, my dear friend. I found myself enjoying each of these thoughts as well as the entire poem. That beauty truly is awe-inspiring. Good luck with the contest
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/20/2023 7:27:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your good luck. Your very kind words made my heart smile. I am so glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great/blessed day..........................
Date: 1/19/2023 3:42:00 PM
So much truth in your poem my dear friend. I strongly agree especially on the line, our body and mind should be one. I especially love your lines, we live from birth to death on His timeline....up to the end. I enjoyed every thought here and the whole poem. So beautiful and inspiring. Thanks a lot for sharing my dear friend. Blessings and best wishes always. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/20/2023 7:24:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your very kind words. I am so glad you enjoyed this write. You have made my day with your words. Have a great/blessed day with hugs.................