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Sour Lemons

Sour lemons seem to bite your tongue; remember the very first time? As seen through the eyes of the young, sour lemons seem to bite your tongue. Think of the fun of being swung; as I recall, it felt sublime. Sour lemons seem to bite your tongue, remember the very first time? As I recall, it felt sublime watching snowflakes fall from the sky. Those magical days in my prime, as I recall, it felt sublime Always covered in dirt and grime, there was nothing that I wouldn't try. As I recall, it felt sublime, watching snowflakes fall from the sky. There was nothing that I wouldn't try, from kiss-and-tell to hide-and-seek. I remember when I was spry, there was nothing that I wouldn't try. Sympatric to people that cry, I never considered them weak. There was nothing that I wouldn't try, from kiss-and-tell to hide-and-seek.

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Date: 5/13/2018 9:57:00 AM
Fun nostalgia, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 11:11:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, your visits are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/26/2015 9:21:00 AM
love the form triolet and same love I feel with your write.. :) weeeee it brings me back to childhood.. :)! weeee!!!... olive eloisa
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Date: 2/25/2015 9:56:00 PM
Great poem, Emile! It brings back the childhood of "firsts" and the excitement that surrounds new discoveries! A 7 :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/26/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Laura, for this vote of confidence and encouragement. Emile.
Date: 2/25/2015 5:41:00 PM
That does bring back some memories...thank you for the relaxing walk in the past, Emile.
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Date: 2/26/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thank you, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 2/25/2015 4:58:00 PM
A wonderful and inspiring poem Emile! Ahhhh the memories of youth.
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Date: 2/26/2015 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Connie, for your kind words and all your generous support. Emile.
Date: 2/25/2015 4:12:00 PM
Good stuff Emile...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/25/2015 4:20:00 PM
Thanks Ken, I appreciate it. Emile.

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