Richard Lamoureux Poet Quatrain

Soup Addict

I just can't believe it
I'm addicted to soup
I can't put the spoon down
I continue to scoop

So many flavours
I can't get enough
It's like there's heroin
They put in this stuff

Sure I can quit
Any time I want
But wait a minute
Look at that font

A few more minutes
Perhaps an hour or two
Good thing I kept reading
I got introduced to you

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Harry Horsman October 26, 2021 at 6:21 PM Here in Western Australia its the 27th of Oct. so 9 years ago today you posted this Gem, which still is relevant today. Richard Lamoureux October 28, 2021 at 3:44 PM It’s hard to believe I’ve been here for almost 10 years and 2000 plus poems later. Harry Horsman October 26, 2021 at 6:22 PM Just like to say, that reading your poems, to me is an education, something i sadly missed out on as a youth.

Tim Smith August 10, 2014 at 12:40 PM haha...I love this Richard...It got worse once I loaded it to my phone...now I access it all the time....cheers

James Fraser April 9, 2013 at 11:57 AM This lovely piece sums up Poetry Soup completely. It's been my poetry home since 2009. More off than on recently, but hopefully on more as the months progress. Fine tribute to this fine site Richard. Thank you also for your kind comments and my placement in your contest. Richard Lamoureux April 9, 2013 at 7:48 PM Your welcome James

Yanny Widjanarko January 10, 2013 at 8:48 AM I remember one of my poem which described the similar addiction to soup too, I'm also the soup addict lately, health to sharpened our knowledge, but bad in eyes and almost lack of sleep hahaha, but somehow, I enjoyed and can't put the spoon down too :), this soup is riched and make us want more and more :) Richard Lamoureux January 10, 2013 at 9:07 AM I do so enjoy scooping the Soup.

Cecilia Macfarlane December 6, 2012 at 2:22 PM I'm addicted to two soups.....homemade variety and this site : ) ....funny how an hour seems like nothing! Cute write! Hugs Richard Lamoureux December 6, 2012 at 2:26 PM Thanks Cecilia How are you doing these days? So nice to hear from you. I hope you are as happy as you look in the photo.

Shaz Cheesman November 2, 2012 at 3:05 AM Let's Toast to the Soup - addiction is what it is alright! A healthy addicition :) - Shaz Richard Lamoureux November 2, 2012 at 8:12 AM Happy to toast my new friend. Shaz Cheesman November 2, 2012 at 3:08 AM hehehehe....sorry just to add - was just reading your replies below.....you r funny Richard!

Poet Destroyer A October 27, 2012 at 8:51 PM Richard, aweee... i know the feeling,, now pass the salt... wink! .. enjoyed your poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD Richard Lamoureux October 28, 2012 at 8:07 AM Tell me about your name, should I be concerned?

Ilene Bauer October 27, 2012 at 4:09 PM this is delicious! Richard Lamoureux October 27, 2012 at 4:58 PM Thanks, eat as much as you like!

Jack Ellison October 27, 2012 at 12:02 PM Going to enjoy reading your "stuff", Richard! My kind of clever humorous writing... cheers, Jack Richard Lamoureux October 27, 2012 at 3:57 PM After reading your work, I have develop my Funnybone a bit further if I want to run with the Big Dog. Thanks for coming by and reading my poem, much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2012 at 10:33 AM So fun. I was doing these addict poems when I first got here too. Nice to meet you. Hope you stay!! Richard Lamoureux October 27, 2012 at 10:36 AM Have you ever entered rehab??? Thanks for reading.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday October 27, 2012 at 9:37 AM Really true, and every time I must leave, there's always something that makes you keeping coming back... for best moments in life, after hard days' work; Keep on writing, please; it's a great pleasure! :) Hanitra Richard Lamoureux October 27, 2012 at 10:04 AM Thank you so much, I am pleased you enjoyed, it is nice of you to take time to write.

Irfana Ali Bhat October 27, 2012 at 8:41 AM so true...reflects the sentiments of all of us on soup....well written...:) Richard Lamoureux October 27, 2012 at 8:59 AM Thanks, I am going to pop over to your writing so I can get better acquainted.

Fabiyas M V October 27, 2012 at 7:38 AM One will easily become an addict to soup.It is tasty.Truly said,Richard Richard Lamoureux October 27, 2012 at 7:40 AM Thanks for taking a sip and dropping by my kitchen.

Toquyen Harrell October 27, 2012 at 7:28 AM Lol, and here I thought it was soup that you eat. Very funny. Yes, I do love the SOUP. The name says as it sounds - a mixture of everything. Love it, Richard. Love ya, Toquyen Richard Lamoureux October 27, 2012 at 7:42 AM I am so glad you enjoyed, thanks for the kind words.